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and another one - "So Long"

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:32 pm
by Dex01
I dunno how but I did yet another track.

http://www.last.fm/music/Dex01/You+Put+ ... lf/So+Long

this one is the best so far. feel free to download (for free) and as always, feedback is very helpful.

Re: and another one - "So Long"

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:02 am
by bizzyd53
I like the layout of the song, but you need to smoothen out the transition from the soft to "hard" part. The hard to soft flowed though, so that's good.

Re: and another one - "So Long"

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:38 am
by Dex01
Thanks a lot. learning how to transition different parts in my music is definitely something I need to learn to do. though it may just be the software I'm using. Garageband doesn't seem to have a "fade" feature :confusion:

Re: and another one - "So Long"

Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:13 pm
by Heather
At the beginning it didn't seem like the vocals were on the same rhythm as the guitars. You songs have catchy hooks, just need fine tuning.

Re: and another one - "So Long"

Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:34 pm
by Nic
That was pretty catchy. I like it man. Nice work.