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Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:23 am
by ThanksForNothing
Hey guys,I' fairlynew at this website,adn wanted to post a song, just tell me what you think of it, but go easy its my first song
Fall:
The match has been lit
The fire has started
The flames are on the ground
Pull the trigger
From the gun
For another time around
From a clowns frown
To Satin’s smile
Who will save us
When we fall
Into the ocean
Of disbelief and disregard
To who we are
Now were drowning
Who can save us all
When we fall
Draw your blade
Stab your hate
Taste the blood
From yesterday
Grab the devil by the horns
Wave goodbye
I’m out the door
Watching as you fall
Into the ocean
Of disbelief and disregard
To who we are
Now you drowning
Who will save you now
When you fall
Your pushing away now
Your pushing away
Your pushing away now
You pushing away
Your speeding away now
I’m not far behind
But I can see now
All of the lies
You out me through
And I’ll watch from above
As you fall
Into the ocean
Of disbelief and disregard
To who you are
Now your drowning
Who will save you now
As you fall
Into the ocean
Of disbelief and disregard
To who you are(No one cares)
Now your drowning(And were laughing)
No one will save you now
As you fall
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:12 am
by sumfan4
God damnit....another sumfan
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:15 am
by Jake-41
Lulz.
Hi. I wish i could format my thoughts in a song, but i can't.. So i enjoy macaroni art.
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:20 am
by ThanksForNothing
what do u guys think?
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:05 am
by billyspleen88
i think its pretty good. i like the sum 41 song references (Grab the devil by the horns, another time around)
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:12 am
by ThanksForNothing
thanks, when i write songs, i try to hide messages inside of them:P and that was one of them
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:47 pm
by UltraKolby
I like it but the chours was my least favorite part but its only your first song, you'll get better with experience
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:39 pm
by patenttiftw
Charley will kill you for that name.
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:19 pm
by Madjid
Why does everyone write about falling, drowning and dying?! You live in fuckin' Canada! I should be writing about drowning and dying because i'm in Africa, If i get to come to your country, i'd be singing spring songs 24/7.
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:20 pm
by Jake-41
Madjid wrote:Why does everyone write about falling, drowning and dying?! You live in fuckin' Canada! I should be writing about drowning and dying because i'm in Africa, If i get to come to your country, i'd be singing spring songs 24/7.
Actually, you'd sing about the snow. It's possible to fall, drown, and die in snow.
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:31 pm
by ThanksForNothing
UltraKolby wrote:I like it but the chours was my least favorite part but its only your first song, you'll get better with experience
I didn't really like the chorus either, it hard t write chrous's that the hardest part
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:34 pm
by patenttiftw
Jake-41 wrote:Madjid wrote:Why does everyone write about falling, drowning and dying?! You live in fuckin' Canada! I should be writing about drowning and dying because i'm in Africa, If i get to come to your country, i'd be singing spring songs 24/7.
Actually, you'd sing about the snow. It's possible to fall, drown, and die in snow.
BAHAHA!!!
sorry, i just had to do that.
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:13 pm
by Shelley41
Madjid wrote:Why does everyone write about falling, drowning and dying?! You live in fuckin' Canada! I should be writing about drowning and dying because i'm in Africa, If i get to come to your country, i'd be singing spring songs 24/7.
I guess happy songs are harder to write!
it's good man. like it
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:03 pm
by UltraKolby
SumFan#41 wrote:UltraKolby wrote:I like it but the chours was my least favorite part but its only your first song, you'll get better with experience
I didn't really like the chorus either, it hard t write chrous's that the hardest part
Same here, but sometimes it just comes to me and other times i force write it and it sounds like shit
Re: Fall
Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:12 pm
by FuckT41182
I like it man ...Grab the devil by the horns :)
Re: Fall
Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:19 am
by ThanksForNothing
UltraKolby wrote:SumFan#41 wrote:UltraKolby wrote:I like it but the chours was my least favorite part but its only your first song, you'll get better with experience
I didn't really like the chorus either, it hard t write chrous's that the hardest part
Same here, but sometimes it just comes to me and other times i force write it and it sounds like shit
Thats basically what i had to do, i had no idea what to write, but the rest of the song was good, well all im gonna say is expet more, and bette