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lyrics help

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 2:42 am
by sprinks41
i'm working on a new song. it's about being a good person, but taking the rebel/asshole within yourself and setting it free for once. which sample do you like better?

Sample 1:
I'm no demon born in heaven
I'm an angel born in hell
Am I evil or am I holy
You'll never be able to tell

Sample 2:
I'm no demon born in heaven
I'm an angel born in hell
I'm as evil as I am holy
I obey as I rebel

Re: lyrics help

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 8:41 pm
by Jake-41
Tough one.. I like sample 2 a little more, though. :D

Re: lyrics help

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:24 pm
by mikey41
sample two is a hella lot better than the first one.

Re: lyrics help

Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:45 am
by Jeremy Kill
Sample two definitely!

Re: lyrics help

Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 5:00 am
by noexcuses
sample 2....more mysterious

Re: lyrics help

Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 5:10 am
by Dylan
lol, i think he's made his decision by now

Re: lyrics help

Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 4:31 pm
by noexcuses
yea.. i am a bit late...