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I have written a song.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:12 am
by TheBitterEnd
This song is okay, but I have really shitty recording equipment and it's a tad repetetive. If you feel generous could I have some comments up on youtube?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z8M8SZ0thhM
Re: I have written a song.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:23 am
by Mike
ill comment you on here
its shit
Re: I have written a song.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:54 am
by Jeremy Kill
It's okay sounding. I'm sure it'd be better with lyrics, as you said, it is repetitive. The part with the phaser or whatever, in the verses, sounds choppy, like not a lot of flow. The ending was cool though.
Re: I have written a song.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 11:03 am
by Jake-41
Are you guys crazy? That was a sick remix of pieces!
Re: I have written a song.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:03 pm
by samueeL
Yeah, it needs vocal melody, otherwise it's hard to comment anything about it..
Re: I have written a song.
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:20 pm
by TheBitterEnd
Yeah, it does sound choppy, I used the built in phaser effects on Mixcraft.
Vocals would make it better, I have lyrics, I just can't sing. That long repetetetive verse would sound so much better with vocals. But I mean, it came out better than I expected anyways.
Re: I have written a song.
Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 7:01 pm
by 41down
Add vocals. They change everything. and who cares if you think your voice sucks, practice makes perfect doesn't it? It will at least give us an idea of how you want it to sound like when it's more or less completed.
Jeremy Kill wrote:The part with the phaser or whatever, in the verses, sounds choppy, like not a lot of flow. The ending was cool though.
This.
Re: I have written a song.
Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:18 am
by shadowred3
ya bro release with vocals, i thought it sounded pretty good