In all honesty, the former sounds a lot better and makes sense. I don't even think "fakeness" was a word to begin with. And if Deryck really did use "fakeness"... then he needs a thesaurus."It's no hard to see through the thickness."
As opposed to:
"It's not hard to see through the fakeness."
Also the Underclass Hero tab book has this to say about the background shouting in The Jester:
"Over minions of Capitol Hill. (Capitol Hill!)
In a bath full of blood (Like a chili up his ass!)"
As opposed to:
"Over minions of Capitol Hill. (Capitol Hill!)
In a bath full of blood (Like a child of the past!)"