Untie The Knot

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Untie The Knot

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this is about a very good friend of mine. she was seeing this guy recently and wasnt thinking straight about it. he ended up wanting to marry her and she actually considered it. i ended up crossing the line by trying to get too involved and she got mad at me. after she finally forgave me, we talked the whole thing out, i told her how i felt and what i thought, and (thank God!) i was able to convince her to change her mind about it. and so this song is about the whole situation.

Verse 1
Talking it out and deals are made
Name exchange and money is paid
She still has a wait on her shoulders
Mind is sacred but she sold hers
Why can't you stay on the road to where you're going?
I just hope you understand and know what you're doing

Chorus
Don't make the mistake
It's a bond I can't break
I don't wanna see you get hurt
I hope you're on the alert (Blinded by the disarray)
Wish you would untie the knot (What do you think she would say?)
Don't give what you haven't got
There's a muffled scream in my stomach
But what I think just doesn't cut it

Verse 2
How could something so right go so wrong?
I have cleared my head and admit I was wrong
Shady acts have begun
I hope you'll see that you're too young
With a head full of games and a mouth full of lies
This all came to me as no surprise

(Chorus)

Bridge
We know that it's in you I confide
But has this become a bore?
I can't decide if I'm satisfied
or do I want something more?
I don't wanna go through the motions
When I hear the words out of your mouth
I know you're overwhelmed with emotions
But how can I support something I doubt?

(Chorus)
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But I love Bill Kaulitz! :balling: ooops sorry these lyrics are not about me? :blush: damn ego-drug... :angry:

well written lyrics, good job!
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Neverwakeup wrote:But I love Bill Kaulitz! :balling: ooops sorry these lyrics are not about me? :blush: damn ego-drug... :angry:

well written lyrics, good job!
thanks!
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nice, all your lyrics I've seen are really good.
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Gutter Dreams wrote:nice, all your lyrics I've seen are really good.
wow, thank you Sarah! that really means a lot!
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I liked it. Very nice, man, very nice!
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Hentaiman wrote:I liked it. Very nice, man, very nice!
thank you!
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