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"Every Little Word" - original

Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:05 am
by Heather
wrote another one this past week
lyrics

I'm lying, on the tile floor
From falling out the swivel door
You walked right by me
With a wink and a smile
I'd get down on my knees to
make you mine
Why do I gotta be so damn shy?

Cause when I finally get the guts to walk up to you
Its gonna take all I've got not to
Scream out every little word
I've been wanting to say
I know I'm gonna blurt it out in some awkward way
Stumble over syllables
From I Love You to
What the hell have I got myself into?

Its pounding in my heart
I don't know where I should start
You looked me in the eye
The words just slipped my mind
You'd get down on your knees to
Say "be mine"
Why do I gotta be so damn blind?

Re: "Every Little Word" - original

Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:43 am
by turtlehobopirate
Awesome job! Love the lyrics and the guitar.

Re: "Every Little Word" - original

Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:07 am
by Shiv
1st verse is reallllly good
second verse...eh?


thats all i heard
lol

Re: "Every Little Word" - original

Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 3:09 am
by Heather
Shiv wrote:1st verse is reallllly good
second verse...eh?
thats all i heard
lol
yeah I agree with ya, the 2nd verse needs work

Re: "Every Little Word" - original

Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:16 pm
by Madjid
Love it.

Re: "Every Little Word" - original

Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:27 pm
by Aaron
your best song

Re: "Every Little Word" - original

Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 4:20 am
by Heather
thanks guys!