It's Over - [A Song i wrote]

[Hentaiman]

It's a song i wrote, its basically a song that i was inspired to write by a chick, and though never been officialy her boyfriend, i guess its predicted what happened anyway, but the ending tries to be kinda positive.
anyway, its a song about someone who hates his girlfriend and wants to dump her, but then he wants her back, even though he knows he would never be able to.

Hope you like it.

[Intro]
There’s no point proving
There’s no way to say it
There’s no one talk to
And I…

[Verse 1]
If I could only say it
I know you would never hear it
My heart is now hardly beating
if we could stop this world we sit in
its not simple with you
I don’t know what to do [to do x2]
Waiving is pointless at you [at you x2]
what the hell do we do? [dooooo]

[Chorus]
Goodbye its over!
Finally I’m sober!
Tonight, yeah it’s done!
Believe me, it’s no fun!
No one can understand you now

[verse 2]
If only I wouldn’t be so blind
It’s my fault – all this slip-and-slide
I wouldn’t do this all alone
I needed you to hold me…
and you let go, fuck off, leave me!
what the hell happened to you?

[Guitar solo]

[pre chorus – quiet vocals]
Goodbye its over
Finally I’m sober
just try and change me
this world just hates me!

[verse 3]
if could I only say I’m sorry
it was all a mistake
forgive me, for god’s sake
It can’t be like that, anymore... anymore... Anymore!
so what do we do now?

[backing vocals: it’s over, man, let it go]

[chorus x2]

[outro – quiet vocals]
Goodbye, it’s over
I don’t want to be sober...


Tell me what you guys think :P

[Dylan]

really cool :D

i tried writting a song once, but it sucked, a lot.

[Brownmetal]

Nice, I suck at writing lyrics. :D

[Hentaiman]

thanx dudes.
i just had this inspiration from this chick (fuckin' whore... ), so it went out good.

i wrote some more songs but i doubt they're as good as this one.
glad you liked it :P

[Living_Life_In_Caps_Lock]

GAHH!!!!

I always listen to stuff like this and I love it all!!!!!!

It is so effing awsome!!!!!!!!!!

[HilgaMan]

really cool :D

i tried writting a song once, but it sucked, a lot.

[withchappedlips]

whatevz.
it's all good.
i don't see why i ever check threads in this section because i never like anything written. it's all to straightforward. no hidden meanings, no confusion.