Song Of Love

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Song Of Love

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Feel free to dedicate this to anybody you are in love with right now. :D

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I waited all week for those just nine hours
If i'd have rememberd I'd have brought flowers
Went out for a walk
I tried not to talk
Nothing means everything when im around you

Your eyes
And the way that they stare
Your Face
And your lovely blonde hair
Your Smile
Makes it worthwile
My heart is racing when im not around you

If I had the opportunity I'd learn voodoo
I'd really attempt anything to try and do you
Im so in love
with the skies above
Your falling like raindrops and I cant catch you

Your eyes
And the way that they stare
Your Face
And your lovely blonde hair
Your Smile
Makes it worthwile
Im part of your fairytale and thats good for you

(bridge)

Being apart
breaks my heart
When im lonely
your my one and only
Im dumstruck
Im such a dumb fuck
lets go and make out in the back of the movies

Your eyes
And the way that they stare
Your Face
And your lovely blonde hair
Your Smile
Makes it worthwile
I wrote this song about and its just for you
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Post by Gibsum 41 »

LOVE IS FOR THE IGNORANT!!!

hehe, just kidding
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its good, but almost every last line is too long, maybe break it up into two seperate lines.

other than that, its good.
you have far too much time on your hands

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Post by Dan »

NoReason27 wrote:its good, but almost every last line is too long, maybe break it up into two seperate lines.

other than that, its good.
Thanks.

We a practise today, and played this. The words fit in perfectly with the vocal melody I have. If we ever record it, I'll post it here.
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ya i was thinking about this thread and i thought i should've added "unless it fits the medley you have". ya sure go nuts post it if you want. :)
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Post by shivv_55 »

thats a reallly nice song
It'd be awesome if you could post it!
I'd love to hear it
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Re: Song Of Love

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As promised just over three months ago, here is the Song Of Love

www.myspace.com/sameoldgamemusic
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it's catchy
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