a chorus i wrote

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erikj9
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a chorus i wrote

Post by erikj9 »

Just a chorus thinking of verses still.


My life is gold
Fuck the whole world, I know
This is getting too old
for me, Why can't we
Make peace not war
Fuck the whole world, I'm sore
this is getting too hard
for me, Why can't we
live a life
perfectly

Yes, i wrote this when i was in a very pissed off mood
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Re: a chorus i wrote

Post by dearyou_182 »

oo erik you poet.
i like alot, very BCR :smug:
I'm the tower, you're the airplane.
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If we could sit together a moment
and talk forever just to pass the time
i would smile as the shivers and chills run down my spine
when your eyes are locked on mine
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Post by J-Pan »

nice but really needs a verse
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