Punk Rock Chick [updated version of my song]

[Hentaiman]

Well, I wrote this song "Punk Rock Chick" which is here on the board and i've changed it a little bit and here's the updated version, i like it a lot more actually:

[verse 1]
Body pierced, a cigarette in her hand
I saw her in the street
Never looked at her, never thought about her
I saw her at the show
But i didn't know
She was a punk rock chick
It just this one day, I saw her again
She was so freakin' hot, I thought i went insane

[chorus]
She was punk rock chick (A punk rock chick!)
A girl so perfect i never thought i'm gonna meet
She was punk rock chick ((A punk rock chick!)
I saw her from a distance but she was so sweet

[verse 2]
I saw her before, I never knew at all
That she not only likes... to go to the mall
I knew it felt weird, i knew it was insane
I could feel the pain, while standing in the rain!
So don't judge me... [quiet]
So don't judge me... [quiet]

[chorus]

[fast]
piercing, tattooes, knits, cigarettes,
mini skirt, rings, spiked belt, headsets!

[interlude]

[chorus x3]
[outro]

[tomhoppus]

ha, nice! you listened to Noreason!

[Dylan]

nice. if you ever make it big, i better be noted as the co-writer and get some of the royalties.

[wiggs1441]

nice. if you ever make it big, i better be noted as the co-writer and get some of the royalties.

can you give some royalties to a grand noob

[tomhoppus]

nice. if you ever make it big, i better be noted as the co-writer and get some of the royalties.

can you give some royalties to a grand noob

or a n00b.... you will be ROYALLY fucked if you dont

[Dylan]

im sorry, if i get any i cannot give some to "grand-noobs" or "newbs". but i might like about giving them to "n00bs"

[tomhoppus]

pwnt

[HilgaMan]

nice. if you ever make it big, i better be noted as the co-writer and get some of the royalties.

can you give some royalties to a grand noob

or a n00b....

Or to a n00bs raping friend?

[tomhoppus]

nice. if you ever make it big, i better be noted as the co-writer and get some of the royalties.

can you give some royalties to a grand noob

or a n00b....

Or to a n00bs raping friend?

I'll split my shares with you darling. Why were you gone yesterday?

[HilgaMan]

nice. if you ever make it big, i better be noted as the co-writer and get some of the royalties.

can you give some royalties to a grand noob

or a n00b....

Or to a n00bs raping friend?

I'll split my shares with you darling. Why were you gone yesterday?

Thanks

And I was at my dads. He's so poor he hasn't got computer.

[tomhoppus]

nice. if you ever make it big, i better be noted as the co-writer and get some of the royalties.

can you give some royalties to a grand noob

or a n00b....

Or to a n00bs raping friend?

I'll split my shares with you darling. Why were you gone yesterday?

Thanks

And I was at my dads. He's so poor he hasn't got computer.

Oh, I missed you. Does anyone know what happened to R.?

[Dylan]

how did this get so off topic?

[HilgaMan]

how did this get so off topic?

Because of me and tomhoppus

[tomhoppus]

how did this get so off topic?

You were talking about royalties, then I came..........

[Dylan]

how did this get so off topic?

You were talking about royalties, then I came..........

[Hentaiman]

damn, so fuckin' off topic!!

talk about my freakin' song in this topic, for a change!

[tomhoppus]

damn, so fuckin' off topic!!

talk about my freakin' song in this topic, for a change!

We talked about it in the other thread

lol, its a good song

[Hentaiman]

damn, so fuckin' off topic!!

talk about my freakin' song in this topic, for a change!

We talked about it in the other thread

lol, its a good song

lol, but i opened another thread for it cuz i totally changed it and you went all off topic like that

[HilgaMan]

damn, so fuckin' off topic!!

talk about my freakin' song in this topic, for a change!

Sorry mate :/