My First Songs

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My First Songs

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Beside my first song, which i posted on here already, these are my first songs i wrote. there shitty, and im full of hate today, so i want to share with you!! :D



here is Best Ride

I haven't talked to you
In a while I feel so alone
Again I think around the town
Your laughter is the best ride
I'm fending on my own
Not a loan from anyone
I don't know why
But I just want to die

I just gotta wait to see
What it is like
It is a slight nightmare
Aren't you feeling so mad
You just can't see
You just can't see
How much I need this

Now I can drive down the street
I need a loan just to buy it off
Get help every once in a while
But not enough to give a smile
A few extra dollars is enough for me
I know now where you have to be
I haven't takled to you in a while
I feel so alone

I just gotta wait to see
What it is like
It is a slight nightmare
Aren't you feeling so mad
You just can't see
You just can't see
How much I need this

Here is I Need you

i need help from you
You are my greatest love
You were there during good
And the worse times
I love you so
And you do to

I need your help
To start again
Oh how I need you now
You are the best here
And that's all you need

I want your pride
You are my greatest achievement
You are here now
And that's all that matters
I want you so
And you want me to

I need your help
To start again
Oh how I need you now
You are the best here
And that's all you need

Thank-You
But our time is
Running thin
Well begone soon
But it's for the best
In all of us

I need your help
To start again
Oh how I need you now
You are the best here
And that's all you need

You were my best
Through the tough times
Oh how I loved you
But now were just friends
(Again?)

Here is Liar (kinda a joke song, but not really)

Liar you filthy scumbag
Liar you cheating whore
I thought I was your friend at first
But I was wrong wasn't I
Liar you know-it-all slut
Liar you tree humping dick
When we were together
That was the worst mistake
That I have or will ever make

Liar you liar why must you
Cheater no one likes you all
Liar you Liar I wish to kill
Oh you little punk I will get you
(Oh how I will)
Leave me alone you brat
I did but you just won't

Hater you always did to me
Hater you always couldn't see
You never were my friend
And I was in the trend
Hater I never saw your face
Hater you left without a trace
We were never together
And I am so glad about that
Still you never kissed her

Liar you liar why must you
Cheater no one likes you all
Liar you Liar I wish to kill
Oh you little punk I will get you
(Oh how I will)
Leave me alone you brat
I did but you just won't

Why won't you just let go!

Staying in my bed
The nagging begins
So please help me

Take on the torture
The stabbing blow torch
It's killing spree Murdering
Help me now getting away
From this this beating
(Hahaha so long suckers)

Dont you want this

Come on right now (Don't You Want This)
The air is as thick as somke
I wanna go in your room (Don't You Want This)
Why do you keep on your clothes
Show us the way you look (Don't You Want This)
Come on don't you move
Can't we stay a little (Don't You Want This)

Time ran short for now
Your face fades away
Lay your head on mine
Why do we leave

Why did we have to leave
We didn't want to go
Your my only pet peave (Don't You Want This)
We are wanting you so
Your face is in my mind (Don't You Want This)
As we drive away from hear
Sometimes times I wish I was blind (Don't You Want This)
But not when you are near

Time ran short for now
Your face fades away
Lay your head on mine
Why do we leave

My life was never the same again
After you came and went
How could you say that I was yours
Look to the future
And think of a miracle
And maybe today we could sleep

Time ran short for now
Your face fades away
Lay your head on mine
Why do we leave

Time ran short for now
Your face fades away
Lay your head on mine
Why do we leave

Why'd we have to go
My life just took away
I love you so
I'll come back when I wanna

Why'd we have to go
My life just took away
I love you so
I'll come back when I wanna

Time ran short for now
Your face fades away
Lay your head on mine
Why do we leave


Time ran short for now
Your face fades away
Lay your head on mine
Why do we leave

Why'd we have to go
My life just took away
I love you so
I'll come back when I wanna

Time ran short for now
Your face fades away
Lay your head on mine
Why do we leave

Type of Style Long song :lol:
Me and him we don't think the same
I like that but he doesn't
He might be gay I'm not sure
But all I know is he's different

Our type of style is so different
I am normal but he isn't
I know he is very different

Our type of style is so different
I am normal but he isn't
I know he is very different

When i started getting better.......

Didnt take it (kyle and jimmy would be the singers)

Jimmy:
You didn't take it
No you didnt take
But look how far
You made it
Who knew that you would


You got so far
Then he threw it away
When you were there
We thought he was gay
He broke it up
Just to start again

Kyle:
I didn't take
No I didnt take it
But look how far
I made it
Who knew that I would

You got so far
Then he threw it away
When you were there
We thought he was gay
He broke it up
Just to start again

You got so far
Then he threw it away
When you were there
We thought he was gay
He broke it up
Just to start again

Jimmy:
Get on back
Please get on back

Kyle:
I can get on back
Oh I can get on back

Both:
I knew that I would!

Jimmy:
You didn't take it look how far you made it
Kyle:
I didn't take it look how far I made it
Jimmy:
You didn't take it look how far you made it
Kyle:
I didn't take it look how far I made itJimmy:
You didn't take it look how far you made it
Kyle:
I didn't take it look how far I made it

Everythings Worth It

Everythings worth it)
Everythings worth it for you
I need help so bad
And you're the one who can
(So please just help)

So everything is worth it for
Everything is worth it for you
Do you understand
Just please come along

(Everythings worth it)
Where did you go
I needed you so badly
So just come here for now
(Just please come)

So everything is worth it for
Everything is worth it for you
Do you understand
Just please come along

So everything is worth it for
Everything is worth it for you
Do you understand
Just please come along

(Everythings worth it)
Please don't quit on me
I need to leave
Good-bye forever
(Please just one more moment)

Worst regret

(Your my worst regret)
Why must you haunt me?
Your my worst regret
I try to escape
But you always track me down
When you tried to flee
I let you go!

Are you going to die on your own?
Are you going to spit on my grave?
Am I going to meltdown?
Or are you just an angel?

(Why don't you leave?)
You tried to break me down
You we're my first regret
But I escaped
You chase me forever
When you let go
I fleeded from the scene

Are you going to die on your own?
Are you going to spit on my grave?
Am I going to meltdown?
Or are you just an angel?

Are you going to die on your own?
Are you going to spit on my grave?
Am I going to meltdown?
Or are you just an angel?

Why must you attack me?
I want to kill you now
But it's time to leave
And you got lucky
Good bye

Are you going to die on your own?
Are you going to spit on my grave?
Am I going to meltdown?
Or are you just an angel?

How things can (a fast, shitty - but good song)

How things can be perfectly designed
How things can always be left behind
How things can change your life
How things can put you through alot of strife

Remember when we could design
Remember when we were always left behind
No those were the worst days
And all in the worst ways

How don't you remember on
How things can be changed
We all know it's for the best
Be we gotta move on

We would always play around
And how it was very profound
We would never touch the ground
And it was when you were around

How don't you remember on
How things can be changed
We all know it's for the best
Be we gotta move on

And my 2nd most recent song, Untitled


(Come on let me hold you, touch you,
feel you, always, kiss you,
taste you, all night, always)

She'd be a serious one
And a beautiful one
Not a fuck, sex and squeeze one
With a slut and whore look

So maybe let me
Hold you, and almost touch and feel you
But not to long
Kiss you, and almost taste you
Almost, right now

You were there
You are still a true friend
You always shared
And we just blend

All those sluts, and jocks
Who would always mock (us, us, us)
And we would always just shake it off
Almost pretend that's its all ok
That there is some one out there
Who feel just like us
They'd screw each other on the bus
And we would just be friends (For now, now, now)

So maybe let me
Hold you, and almost touch and feel you
But not to long
Kiss you, and almost taste you
Almost, right now

You were there
You are still a true friend
You always shared
And we just blend (Together, Together,Together)

Were the greatest pair,
They're the worst pair,
They won't last
But we will

(But we will, But we will, But we will)


Feedback please :D :P :roll: :mrgreen:

Or, you could check out all of my lyrics at... http://www.songmeanings.net/artist.php?aid=137438980538
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I read like 2 songs and I must say there "yummy-licious"
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wiggs1441 wrote:I read like 2 songs and I must say there "yummy-licious"
"yummy-licious" indeed
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Gibsum 41 wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:I read like 2 songs and I must say there "yummy-licious"
"yummy-licious" indeed
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I liked the line "liar you tree humping dick"
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BrandonCorey wrote:I liked the line "liar you tree humping dick"
:D :lol: that was probably my least favorite song line ever wrote by me :lol:
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