stop dreaming of yesterday

[kingy_1991]

Stop dreaming of yesterday (short song)


Yesterday I tried to say,
how beautiful u look today,
turned round and looked at me,
said you’d rather die than breath,
retrospective is a big word,
but agrees that you are disturbed,
went to doctors for there help,
they said your head was one big round about.

And i said to them,
u never was and your never guna be my friend

(rock out bit)


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plz say what u think, this is either gunna b a short song or ill extend it

rock on!

[Gibsum 41]

well i guess its okay.
probably could use a little more rhyming (just a little)

[Avey41]

keep it coming it is so kool !!!