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Post by Kano »

hey ive written 3 new songs

This Song is called and the walls came crashing down

(happy nice riff)

CLICK!

( loud distorted riff)

there is no god
cant you see

its all crashing around me

u wont hold
for much longer

because time is wearing thin

now I see you don’t care
lol fucking death

crashing walls
faling down
deadly wounds
making silent sounds
crashing walls
burning faster
deadly wounds

Faling Faster!

(Loud distorted riff)

I don’t see the ending of this does she
I don’t see the ending of this does he
I don’t see the ending of this do u

Now I see u don’t care
Now I see noone cares

OH OW
crashing walls
faling down
deadly wounds
making silent sounds
crashing walls
burning faster
deadly wounds
falling faster

crashing walls
faling down
deadly wounds
making silent sounds
crashing walls
burning faster
deadly wounds

falling faster
faster
faster
faster

FASTER

(guitar solo)


(soft guitar)
crashing walls
faling down
deadly wounds
making silent sounds
crashing walls
burning faster
deadly wounds

(distortion kicks in)


crashing walls
faling down
deadly wounds
making silent sounds
crashing walls
burning faster
deadly wounds


Its all over

(music stops)








This i called The Words aren't Coming

Intro

We sit down to talk
Ive been thinking about this all---- night
U tell me whats going on
How u feel
And whats up with your life

I kiss--- you so tenderly
U kiss--- me with ur teary eyes shut
I wonder--- if it will realy work
Or am I stuck again
With the words not coming out…..

The next--- day
You don’t turn up
Is it my fault ur fault
That I made u think I felt the same again

Im sorry---- this shouldn’t of hapend
Im sorry---- I blew it all again
Im stuck again
With the words not coming out

Solo/instrumental

Dammit---- u think im a jerk
Dammit ---- this will never ever work
Im stuck again
With the word not coming out





this song is called Gambling Game

With you it’s like gambling with my heart on the stake
U grab it with fear and consumes it with hate
I cannot take this pain anymore
U have to understand I need to score


Y do I bother when u don’t even try
Y do I care when u look down a sigh
I don’t know y I even tried this stupid game
As I said before it like gambling away

As I put down my guard go for the heart
I start to tremble with fear
And now I realize u used me with fear

I smash down the table and fall to my knees
I start to think y u where so pleased
Now I see I have been consumed with your hate
Im dangerous
Deadly
An awful disgrace

And I wonder where I go now!




lol soz for all the typos im really lazy

please say yes or no and if u think they suck make it constructive so i can get better :D :D
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Post by tomhoppus »

would this go in the musicianss section?

and ill listen to them later tonight when there up (obviously :roll: smacks self in head)
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k, ill check this out later
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oh soz for puting it in the wrong section lol i looked and thought oh writing ok lol
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Nice kane... very nice... now send me the riff so i can work on a bass to it... :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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this are great. i liked the first one the most. i'll work the drums for it :mrgreen:
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add on choice.there must be 3 choices yes,no,I'm too lazy for read all these things
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Post by Kano »

oh soz ill add choice and thanks for the support ( but please dont steal the lyrics becuasem i put so much efort in thanks for suppor

and BTW J-pann is my mate from school hes new he loves sum 41 (because i intoduced him to them) so make him feel welcome guys
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Gibsum 41 wrote:this are great. i liked the first one the most. i'll work the drums for it :mrgreen:
thanks for the support im glad u like em!
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kanguv41 wrote:add on choice.there must be 3 choices yes,no,I'm too lazy for read all these things
by choices do u meen like choice on witch u like best? ( if so i cantr becuase it dosnt let me edit the poll soz)
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k muhah i was joking
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Gibsum 41 wrote:this are great. i liked the first one the most. i'll work the drums for it :mrgreen:
J-Pan wrote:Nice kane... very nice... now send me the riff so i can work on a bass to it... :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
and i'll work on a Tuba part for it! :mrgreen:
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pretty darn good
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Umm... Is it just me or seems this to be in wrong section? :?
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Post by tomhoppus »

i posted that as the first comment
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Post by Phili »

We really should merge the Lyrics and Creative Writing sections. But until then...

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Post by Hentaiman »

I liked the first , its very good.
The third is also nice.

Didn't like the second though.
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Post by Peterr »

God I wish I could write music like you guys can lol.
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yesi like em!!!
Avryck=My Everything, Sum 41 are amazing
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