Its another kinda Metalcore/Hardcore punk oriented song i wrote.
Working title is "The Circle Goes Forever".
Now! Now! Now! Yeah! [harsh scream]
[verse 1]
I never knew
I'm gonna sell my soul
It felt so true
It felt like hitting a wall! [growl]
I Shouldn't've sell my soul
It was all a mistake
Why the hell I answered that call?
Why the fuck were I awake?! [growl]
[chorus]
Yeah! Now! [growl]
You can't stop! [growl]
The circle goes forever!
Yeah! Now! [growl]
Satan has your soul!
The devil takes his reign
you sould your soul forever!
[verse 2]
When you sold your soul
You lost a part of yourself
Its like hitting a wall
Only alone... without help! [growl]
When i saw such chance
I felt so confident
I would want to stop
But now... I can't! [growl]
[chorus]
You sold your soul forever [x3] [quiet vocals]
YOU SOLD YOUR SOUL FOREVER! [growl]
[guitar solo + outro]
The Circle Goes Forever (Working title)
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i don't like it. :? sorry dude.
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Thanx for the comments, guys, and Bullet_guy (could i call you like that now? :D), yeah its kinda like BFMV screams, kinda hardcore, but really, if you guys have any ideas for a better melody or genre of music that it'll fit into, just tell me what you got in mind, what melody is in your head.
NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.
NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.
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i will, its not that this song is bad, it's i don't listen to the hardcore stuff.Hentaiman wrote:NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.
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Yeah im not that into hardcore either but some hardcore is nice, but if you have ideas for a more punky melody, its fine by me, since we play in band kinda this Punk with Heavy metal, thats why Hardcore is kinda between, but we play stuff from Punk to Metal so its cool.NoReason27 wrote:i will, its not that this song is bad, it's i don't listen to the hardcore stuff.Hentaiman wrote:NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.
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Like Sum 41??Hentaiman wrote:Yeah im not that into hardcore either but some hardcore is nice, but if you have ideas for a more punky melody, its fine by me, since we play in band kinda this Punk with Heavy metal, thats why Hardcore is kinda between, but we play stuff from Punk to Metal so its cool.NoReason27 wrote:i will, its not that this song is bad, it's i don't listen to the hardcore stuff.Hentaiman wrote:NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.
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Yeah, kinda like :Dtomhoppus wrote:Like Sum 41??Hentaiman wrote:Yeah im not that into hardcore either but some hardcore is nice, but if you have ideas for a more punky melody, its fine by me, since we play in band kinda this Punk with Heavy metal, thats why Hardcore is kinda between, but we play stuff from Punk to Metal so its cool.NoReason27 wrote:i will, its not that this song is bad, it's i don't listen to the hardcore stuff.Hentaiman wrote:NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.
and heavier stuff too.
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Re: The Circle Goes Forever (Working title)
wow i love it :)
your all making me feel good about my lyrics and songs now cause i am similar
your all making me feel good about my lyrics and songs now cause i am similar
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Re: The Circle Goes Forever (Working title)
No offense, this is cool too, but I think the older songs u showed me are better.
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