You Were Different - [A Metalcore oriented song i wrote]

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You Were Different - [A Metalcore oriented song i wrote]

Post by Hentaiman »

Hey, here's a new Metalcore oriented song i wrote so it says when the lyrics should be sang like in a death growl/scream.
Hope you'll enjoy :D



[verse 1]
Well now i can't
can't do it without you
every second that i spend
you know that i want you
you know i wanted you
wanted you to hold me
but now i hate you
AND JUST WANT YOU TO LEAVE ME! [growl/scream]

[chorus]
You, everytime i look for you
I'm falling apart
You, everytime i lose you
I get a dart in my heart
Everytime i see you
I forget again
That back when i met you
YOU WERE DI-FFE-RENT! [growl/scream]

[verse 2]
Well, now i can't
can't go through this alone
every second that i spend
i feel i can't move on
you know
how much pain you have caused
everytime you looked at me
I JUST FELT SO LOST!!! [growl/scream]

[chorus]

[guitar bridge+solo]

[outro, quiet vocals]
You, everytime i look for you
I just can't stand
Everytime i lose you
I just pretend...
Pretend! Pretend!
Pretend It all just would end! [scream]

[chorus x2]
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Post by HilgaMan »

Good job man :> I'll stick on my opinion which I said in MSN yesterday. U are a very good songwriter. :wink: And I really would like to hear this song when you finish it :>
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