Feel free to dedicate this to anybody you are in love with right now. :D
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I waited all week for those just nine hours
If i'd have rememberd I'd have brought flowers
Went out for a walk
I tried not to talk
Nothing means everything when im around you
Your eyes
And the way that they stare
Your Face
And your lovely blonde hair
Your Smile
Makes it worthwile
My heart is racing when im not around you
If I had the opportunity I'd learn voodoo
I'd really attempt anything to try and do you
Im so in love
with the skies above
Your falling like raindrops and I cant catch you
Your eyes
And the way that they stare
Your Face
And your lovely blonde hair
Your Smile
Makes it worthwile
Im part of your fairytale and thats good for you
(bridge)
Being apart
breaks my heart
When im lonely
your my one and only
Im dumstruck
Im such a dumb fuck
lets go and make out in the back of the movies
Your eyes
And the way that they stare
Your Face
And your lovely blonde hair
Your Smile
Makes it worthwile
I wrote this song about and its just for you
Song Of Love
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its good, but almost every last line is too long, maybe break it up into two seperate lines.
other than that, its good.
other than that, its good.
"The missing part of me that grows around me like a cage..."

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- Resident Skumfuk
- Posts: 6786
- Joined: Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:44 pm
- First name: Dylan
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♂
- AKA: NoReason27, 2712
- 360 Gamer Tag: Watchmaker2112
- Instrument 1: Bass+Guitar
- Instrument 2: Engineer+Production
- Twitter: @dylanb_27
ya i was thinking about this thread and i thought i should've added "unless it fits the medley you have". ya sure go nuts post it if you want. :)
"The missing part of me that grows around me like a cage..."

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