As it falls let it die
Hearts shatter when they hit the floor
We lost it all, they said you cried
You can't look back if you walk out that door
Chorus for a song Im writing
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^Very catchy. I think that would be super hit even without any actual verses. 8)Luke The Spook (LTS) wrote:the best chorus i've written is"
"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"
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^It does a bit...Luke The Spook (LTS) wrote:it sounds like something a boy band would sing.HilgaMan wrote:^Very catchy. I think that would be super hit even without any actual verses. 8)Luke The Spook (LTS) wrote:the best chorus i've written is"
"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"
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Sumfan is my n00b.
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Re: Chorus for a song Im writing
one of my choruses>>>
I’m falling falling
I see the shallow grave in front of me
I’m falling tell me is this a dream
Wake me up now let me see
Is this the end of me
Cause I’m falling falling
I’m falling falling
I see the shallow grave in front of me
I’m falling tell me is this a dream
Wake me up now let me see
Is this the end of me
Cause I’m falling falling