I wrote this like 2 or 3 years ago and it is definitely in need of help, I just want to know if you think it is worth trying to make it better. I like it enough to possibly modify it and make it worth my time... tell me what you think!
A Years Waste Of Time
You were my one best friend,
The one that I could trust with everything
No matter what, I knew you cared
You were always there
So what happened? What happened?
Are you done with me?
Because I’m done with you
Can you see my eyes?
Or is it that you see right through
I am trying to find truth on an endless climb
But all I’ve found out, is that you were a years waste of time
You were my anti-drug
I knew that I loved you
I thought of what you had to say
Each and everyday
So what happened? Tell me what happened.
Are you done with me?
Because I’m done with you
Can you see my eyes?
Or is it that you see right through
I am trying to find truth on an endless climb
But all I’ve found out, is that you were a years waste of time
I cant stop thinking about you
I think I really miss you
I get so jealous sometimes
I cant stop thinking about you
I think I really miss you
I get so jealous sometimes
I cant stop thinking about you
I think I really miss you
You were a years waste of time
Na, na, na, na,….
A years waste of time
Na, na, na, na,….
A years waste of time
I wrote this one a while back...
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I wrote this one a while back...
but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.
So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,
I'm just not ready to leave my room.
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