All Washed up (working title)

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LTS
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All Washed up (working title)

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the song itself is a political song, about politicians who fling bullshit this way and that. of every song i've written, it's been the hardest to write just cuz i can't find the rights word to express my anger and fruistration with politicians, the government, and the war. it's a work in progress and this is probally not the final version. but here it is. i wrote this song at 3 in the morning one night on 6 sticky notes. I've changed the lyrics to this song about 12 times so far. (NOTE: some parts sound kinda cheesey just cuz i wanted the words to rhyme, but note the fact it's NOT the final copy, and also note the word frag refers to a fragmentation grenade aka a hand grenade)
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We.......Have had enough
we........ don't think your tough

You... think we're all weak
when we talk, you turn the other cheek.
we won't stand it!
we want somethign new.
something needs to happen.... happen to you!

(chorus)
So take your politics, & take your poison gas
take your money, & shove it up your ass

You wont take our nation, you can't take our flag
you won't take our guns and you wont take our frags

You cant stop the lightning or thunder in the sky
You're all washed up and ready to dry
all wahed up, get ready to die.
(end chourus)

Fight! for the freedom
Fight! for the fair
Can't stop our future.
We got the right to bear
Can't stop the people
Can't stop the Dare
just try and strap us
to an electric chair.
SO i'll be there......

<chrous>


You think you control.. . everything you see
but let me tell you... you can't control me
let me reach in, and pop that little zit.
everything you say, is bullshit.... (alright)

<chorus>

Don't invade US
and dont hate US
just accept US
to be the everyday.......

Crooks, and theifs,
commander in cheifs.
We sponsor violence.
& we pay for the wars
We sponsor silence
We pay for the whores.

<chorus>

And......When... we're all done.
you can set down that gun

Nothin left legit.
everything, full of shit
all washed up and ready to dry
all washed up get ready to die
all washed up and ready to dry
all washed up get ready to die
For you...............

Our one and only leader, our one and only son.
Just close our eyes, wiat till it's done

your not so right, your really really wrong.
this conflict isn't short, it's getting rather long.
as the bombs drop down, the dead decay.
just listen to our voice.. listen up today...

all washed up.....
all washed up.....
all washed up.....
all washed up...
get ready to die.

<chorus>
get ready............. to die.........
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Post by Zam »

Holy shiit.... That was a long ass poem.... lyrics. Haha.


They're pretty good but I think you went a little too much over the edge...
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Zam wrote:Holy shiit.... That was a long ass poem.... lyrics. Haha.


They're pretty good but I think you went a little too much over the edge...
again, it was at like 2 or 3 in the mornign and i was on a roll,,, i don't stop when i'm on a roll
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