The drums don't seem in time with the orchestration. You've got melody, but it seems to lack structure and consistent time. You got potential though, just keep working at it. The first few songs I wrote were far worse than this.Noreason757 wrote:Which parts don't you guys like about it? like specifically, this kind of stuff can be helpful to future endeavors. its been doin better than most of my other stuff on soundcloud so im just wonderin whats wrong, their might be something i keep on overlooking when listening to it that i could fix if someone told me.
Yeah that is pretty much how i felt too about this when listening to it.cladam41 wrote: The drums don't seem in time with the orchestration. You've got melody, but it seems to lack structure and consistent time. You got potential though, just keep working at it. The first few songs I wrote were far worse than this.
