Hey guys, I share with you my new songs.
Narcissism (In The Sky)
Lights
Magnetic Fields
The Beginning
My new stuff, new songs, etc.
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Sounds great well done, though Narcissism (In The Sky) is my favourite :D
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I really enjoyed listening to "Narcissism", I think it's the best one. "Lights" has this weird vibe that I'm not sure how I feel about. The guitar tone in "Magnetic Fields" and "The Beginning" was great.
If you want more comments/plays, may I suggest posting your songs in Ultimate Guitar's Original Recordings forum? The users there give good and constructive feedback.
If you want more comments/plays, may I suggest posting your songs in Ultimate Guitar's Original Recordings forum? The users there give good and constructive feedback.
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Thanks so much guys! That's my baby's haha! I love too Narcissism
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These are great. You should consider going to a place like musicxray.com and finding some commercial and movie placements. Those are real nice.
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Thanks guy, but I need to grow a little more with the music, but really thanks guys!
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They are great tunes!, you shoud add lyrics, but awesome songs!
Lights sound a bit like Mars Volta haha the beninning
Lights sound a bit like Mars Volta haha the beninning
This time I've had enough
I'm on my own
But i am Back where I Belong
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Thanks guys! I make a new one! This is a demo, the working title for this is 'Hope', tell me what you think, please and thanks!!!
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For a track titled 'Hope', the beginning and the first half of the solo were really sad! This needs vocals. I didn't like the ending chimes(?); I don't think they serve a purpose. I don't know if that was the feel you're seeking, but until the solo came in it was just on one level without much dynamics.
For some unknown reason, this reminds me of 'Victim' by A7X.
For some unknown reason, this reminds me of 'Victim' by A7X.
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Re: My new stuff, new songs, etc.
The beginning it's like a sad song, after that, the song rises into a 'sex song' haha. And yeah the final chimes don't know why add, but it's a demo at the end. Thanks for your comment!silverdolphin wrote:For a track titled 'Hope', the beginning and the first half of the solo were really sad! This needs vocals. I didn't like the ending chimes(?); I don't think they serve a purpose. I don't know if that was the feel you're seeking, but until the solo came in it was just on one level without much dynamics.
For some unknown reason, this reminds me of 'Victim' by A7X.
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there's something weird and crazy about the song structures and the way to make your songs....but i really like it, its really different from how most people would write a song
i guess.... but it's really awesome dude!
i guess.... but it's really awesome dude!
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Nice stuff! I really like the riff in Narcissism.
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Thanks guys! I try to make new stuff soon. And I'm searching a singer for this project too.