Fall Back

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Fall Back

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girls are often led on and manipulated by guys, and yet after each experience with them, they seem to never learn from it. i have many girl friends and i'm constantly seeing them go through this, so i decided to write a song about it because it bothers me that guys would do this to girls just to get inside their pants.

Verse 1
You fall everytime they start to flirt
Time after time again you get hurt
Open your eyes they only want one thing
Give it to them and they go missing
They don't care they think it's a game
Come with me I won't treat you the same

Chorus
You always fall back, into the same trap
Nothing you can say, will ever make them stay
I promise you I, won't tell you a single lie
Take a chance, I'll show you romance
Take my hand come with me
I understand how they should be

Verse 2
Mind hijackers without a heart
Taking the trust and ripping it apart
Nazis of love that have no souls
Betraying the weak like evil angels
Quantity over quality for the peers
Leaving the victims in a pool of tears

(Chorus)

Bridge
When you're confused it can be hard to see
But I know that you need a guy like me
I'll look in your eyes and hold your hand
Hold you close and try to understand
Don't listen to them, they'll never be there
They'll hurt you and leave 'cause they don't care

(Chorus)

Outro
You tell her lies from the start
You never care about her though
How can you break her heart?
She's not just a girl you know
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Re: Fall Back

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luvs the outro!... great song as well but, i'd need to kno the rythem and the way its sung before i could really appreciate it.
keep writing!
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Dizzy J wrote:luvs the outro!... great song as well but, i'd need to kno the rythem and the way its sung before i could really appreciate it.
keep writing!
thank you Dizzy! umm it was all in my head tbh lol so it's hard to describe the rhythm
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Wow I love it! If you sing this to a heartbroken girl they will truly appreciate it.
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turtlehobopirate wrote:Wow I love it! If you sing this to a heartbroken girl they will truly appreciate it.
thank you :smile:
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Post by silverdolphin »

great song!
nice Meaningful outro! :happy: :winkwink:
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