Nocturnal Nightmare

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Nocturnal Nightmare

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Hey guys, my second song on this site, its called Nocturnal Evening. The verses have a similar tune to Enter Sandman-Metallica, but the chorus is myown tune. Enjoy

Nocturnal Nightmare:
Red and black
Heart attack
Feel the blood
Pumping in your veins
See the light
Turn to night
And your going insane
Hidden graves
Burning flames
Feeling everything you should of before
Bloodshot eyes
You realize
Your running from truth, when you want no more

Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal evening
Approach death and stab it in the neck
No more pain will be brought upon us

Crushed skulls
Devil’s calls
Your soul you can’t find
Angles wings
Stupid things
It never comes to mind
Lost bones
Toasted stones
Drop dead while you can
On this earth
You can’t reverse
Everything you just did

Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal evening
Approach death and stab it in the neck
No more pain will be brought upon us

Rotten teeth
Its underneath
Your skin and bones
The bitter end
You can’t pretend
You the only one who knows
Tightened wrists
Can’t resist
The way you feel
Another curse
Is what its worth
This doesn’t look real

Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal evening
Approach death and stab it in the neck
No more pain will be brought upon us

It feel from the skies
Formed into what believed was friend
But it was hate
And it took place in everyone

Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal evening
Approach death and stab it in the neck
No more pain will be brought upon us
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Re: Nocturnal Nightmare

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sounds cool
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Re: Nocturnal Nightmare

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Boy it sounds emo.
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I made a type shit!
Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal evening
Should really be this:
Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal nightmare
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It does sound a little emo but the like the verses
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sounds good ! I really like "Approach death and stab it in the neck" :happy:
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Re: Nocturnal Nightmare

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Ya,this is way better than my first one,but thereslotsmore to come
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ThanksForNothing wrote:I made a type shit!
Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal evening
Should really be this:
Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal nightmare
I would think the typo is that you wrote angles and not angels
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Re: Nocturnal Nightmare

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sumfan4 wrote:
ThanksForNothing wrote:I made a type shit!
Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal evening
Should really be this:
Crucify your angles
Into the darkest pits in this nocturnal nightmare
I would think the typo is that you wrote angles and not angels
Ya:p it was late when i posted it
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