Ok so i wrote this after i found out the girl i really like, liked someone else, it's called Candle (let me know what you think):
When you leave this room
Shut the door, close the lights
I’ll blow the candle in my heart out
And sit alone in the dark
Don’t worry, you move forward
I’ll stay here, I’ll be just fine
Just fine
The worst part of knowing
Is waiting for someone to hold me and tell me
Tell me everything will be all right
Tell me everything will be all right
No regrets, the words I said
They were sincere, guess it just wasn’t meant to be
God’s master plan, He’s got something else planned
It became a game
And endless cycle
The end result was the same
Just another girl with a different name
But I guess there’s no shame
In letting this be known
With my held up high, I’ll walk home
The worst part of knowing
Is waiting for someone to hold me and tell me
Tell me everything will be all right
Tell me everything will be all right
These are the trials of my youth
The story of my life
A crap shoot, do or die, I lose
But I still wish the best for you
It’s like a piece of me died that night
Only to be reborn stronger
Knowing I wasn’t wrong for her
The ashes of the phoenix rise
And it flies higher than oceans tides
The feelings I kept locked inside
Come out and don’t hide
I’ll be strong
A winding road
Where it goes, I don’t know
I brace myself for this journey
I’ll know the end when I get there
Until then
Until then, it’s a lonely road
Shared by broken dreams and empty souls
Maybe one day, I’ll get what I want
We just want another heart to call our home
I’ll search from New York to Rome
What I need, somebody besides me
The best part is knowing
At the end of the day
I’ll find someone to hold me and tell me
And she’ll tell me everything will be all right
And she’ll tell me everything will be all right
Candle
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Re: Candle
I liked it a lot!It was depressing at first but then it became heart warming
I want to fly, Can you take me far away, Give me a star to reach for, Tell me what it takes, And I’ll go so high, I’ll go so high, My feet won’t touch the ground, its my wings, That pull the strings, I bought these dreams, That all fall down
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Re: Candle
That was great! Like above, it was abit depressing at first, but then it gradually grew more heartwarming. :)
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Re: Candle
It's great.
Though it feels like it was shifting too much, it killed the flow with it.
But if that's meant to be, then awesome.
Though it feels like it was shifting too much, it killed the flow with it.
But if that's meant to be, then awesome.
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Re: Candle
I raised myself very good,so I don't judge people from their looks,and I don't fall in love with every girl that has a blond hair and blue eyes(which often means IQ 75) ...and so I don't really relate to any of those stupid songs ...
but it's okay
but it's okay
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Re: Candle
Raising yourself very good, pfft what a joke...FuckT41182 wrote:I raised myself very good,so I don't judge people from their looks,and I don't fall in love with every girl that has a blond hair and blue eyes(which often means IQ 75) ...and so I don't really relate to any of those stupid songs ...
but it's okay
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don't tell me my father did , I would really have to laugh ...I admit that my parents raised me materially,but not mentally ...if we talk about my personality,only I can speak to that,because I don't believe in the quote ''I am who I am'' or ''I am who I have been'' or ''I am the way I was born'' ...and I barely listen to anyone else than myself , I rather read books and think ...FakeNinja wrote:Raising yourself very good, pfft what a joke...FuckT41182 wrote:I raised myself very good,so I don't judge people from their looks,and I don't fall in love with every girl that has a blond hair and blue eyes(which often means IQ 75) ...and so I don't really relate to any of those stupid songs ...
but it's okay
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
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Re: Candle
i'm like that too, this girl i knew for a while but i recently found it she liked somebody else. i'm more of a personality person because i feel that decides if a person is truly beautiful. and yeah its supposed to flow from depressing to a little happy. i'm trying to convince myself it isn't the end of the world and that i'll eventually find somebodyFuckT41182 wrote:I raised myself very good,so I don't judge people from their looks,and I don't fall in love with every girl that has a blond hair and blue eyes(which often means IQ 75) ...and so I don't really relate to any of those stupid songs ...
but it's okay