a friend of mine was unfortunately betrayed and backstabbed by a good friend of her's and reallyyy upset by the whole situation. she told me she was so hurt, she'll never be able to forgive her friend for the betrayal. i wrote this from her perspective, and she said she loved it.
Verse 1
You had me believe that you'd always be there
How can you deceive me and just not care?
I opened myself up to you
And this is what I get in return
I can't wait 'til the same thing happens to you
I'm gonna smile watching you burn
Chorus
How could you?
You're as low as they come
After all we've been through
You're lower than scum
You betrayed me
You'll never get a second chance
You're dead to me
Good riddance
Verse 2
Nothing you say can change the way I feel
I could barely sleep at night the pain is so unreal
I'm over it now
But I'll never forgive or forget
The shit that you put me through
You're not even worth a regret
(Chorus)
Bridge
Enjoy it now 'cause it won't be long
'Til the fun is over and you have to move on
The tables will turn and then you will see
The feeling of betrayal you inflicted in me
(Chorus)
Dead To Me
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Re: Dead To Me
i find it's very hard to come up with "good" lyrics when dealing with a topic such as this. it always seems like there's too many pronouns. without hearing these chorus lyrics in that actual song, it's hard to think of what they'd sound like. unless you're happy with the lyrics, i would advise coming up with a better chorus.sprinks41 wrote:
Chorus
How could you?
You're as low as they come
After all we've been through
You're lower than scum
You betrayed me
You'll never get a second chance
You're dead to me
Good riddance
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Re: Dead To Me
Yeah I think it's pretty good but I agree about the chorus. Try to come up with something more meaningful instead of just bashing the dude who did it :)
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Re: Dead To Me
I agree that the chorus is shitty, but cmon guys , bashing about someone works ! Green Day FOD - "You're such a fuck,I can't explain it cos I think u suck !"
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
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Re: Dead To Me
you need to scream "cunt" at least 20 times somewhere in the song.
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Re: Dead To Me
hahahaha!!!Bobbyjames wrote:you need to scream "cunt" at least 20 times somewhere in the song.
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