You drew the line
Turned your back on me when it was time
You were afraid
But I kept my promises I stayed
Broke yours, you became a shadow of lies
What’s the point of knowing the truth?
When you’ve gone to the other side
To the point of no return
But every moment of life is just a new experience
The lessons I’ve learned while so delirious
You’re gone but I’m here to stay
All of a sudden what was clear turned murky
Can we go back to the beginning?
Travel back in time
Cause I saw the pendulum stopped swinging
It didn’t seem right
The clock kept ticking
As the dark turned to light
But we stopped growing
And stayed stuck in this plight
Time changes everything
But we’re not changing
Just stuck here going through monotonous motions
We became a tragedy of epic proportions
It’s starting to get harder to breathe
When I know what I really wanted,
Is gone
Laying down looking at the starts lost track of how many I counted,
It's been so long
Falling asleep by the telephone
Can't connect to another time zone
All of a sudden you’ve become a bouquet of regrets
All of sudden the memory of you is getting harder to forget
Makes me wish of the past
And I know it wasn’t meant to last
But it begs me to question
Can we go back to the beginning?
Travel back in time
Cause I saw the pendulum stopped swinging
It didn’t seem right
The clock kept ticking
As the dark turned to light
But we stopped growing
And stayed stuck in this plight
Now the questions still remain
The answers were always there
But they’ve faded into empty space
And the image of your face slowly dissipates
Ever since the day we went our separate ways
Burnt bridges slowly ash away
I kept my promises
I gave it my all
The good memories are here to stay
But I’ll let bad times fade away
Back To The Beginning (Lyrics Plz give feedback)
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Back To The Beginning (Lyrics Plz give feedback)
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Re: Back To The Beginning (Lyrics Plz give feedback)
It feels like the lyrics of a Linkin Park song.
And i don't relate very much to that type of lyrics.
But good job!
And i don't relate very much to that type of lyrics.
But good job!
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Re: Back To The Beginning (Lyrics Plz give feedback)
there is some really awesome stuff here, but personaly id say the lyrics are too long, if I were you I would work on cutting out some of the chaf and just leaving all the really good stuff you have in here.
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Re: Back To The Beginning (Lyrics Plz give feedback)
thank you guys!