You Did This To Yourself

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You Did This To Yourself

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Intro
As the blade touches my wrist
I tremble 'cause I wanna resist
It moves along slicing the skin
I watch the blood pour from within
Thinking about the decision you made
Slowly my senses begin to fade

Verse 1
These words don't lie
I miss you to death
If you have an alibi
I'll hold my breath
For you to come around
And explain to me
Just why you put me down
And then deserted me
But what can you say
To make me believe
You wanted to stay
But just had to leave

Chorus
I don't deserve this hell
And I don't wanna dwell
On why you're acting this way
I got better things to do
Than to care about you
And the ignorance you throw my way
The neglect, disrespect
I can't do anything else
You're on your own
And be it known
You did this to yourself

Verse 2
I always speak so highly of you
And in return this is what you do
I don't care who got involved
You better pray this gets resolved
Give it time and you will see
I need you less than you need me
There's nothing left I can do
I've tried to reach out to you
It's as if you're not there
Or don't wanna care
I'm left in disbelief
'Cause you lied through your teeth

(Chorus)

Bridge
I keep having dreams about you
It hurts me deep inside
Seems that's the only way I can see you
And I wake up feeling deprived
I've never been so hurt before
Never thought you were capable of this
I had a feeling we'd go to war
But I wasn't prepared for this

(Chorus)
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It was way too "cut my wrist" to be appreciated, but other than that it would be great.

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Graphic. Catchy, but graphic.
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:balling: Not happyful :sosad:
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I like it a lot. It's dark (especially the intro lol) but I like that :)
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haha thanks everyone!
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love it!
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