A Lyrical Lie

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A Lyrical Lie

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I’m sick of it all
Every night I lie awake
Waiting for your call
But the phone never rings
You don’t know
Just how much it stings

It’s like I’m going through the motions
But I’m missing conviction
And I’m drowning in an ocean,
It’s getting harder to breathe

I’m standing on the corner
Looking like a loner
Every single day
Hoping you’d come this way
And it’s killing me

You’re everything I hoped for
You shook me to my core
Played a different game
Changed the rules
And my life was never the same

I’m just sitting counting the minutes pass by
But it is all a lyrical lie
Been there, done that,
I tired looking to the sky
Believing in myself
Bullshit, I quit

I’m sick of it all
Every night I lie awake
Waiting for your call
But the phone never rings
You don’t know
Just how much it stings

Just so sick of it
Just so sick of it
It’s killing me
You not knowing
When all this emotion just keeps growing
And I don’t want it to go to waste
Press your lips against mine and give me a taste
Of that Mona Lisa smile that can’t be replaced
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Re: A Lyrical Lie

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leave feedback, i love reading what others have to say about what i write :glad:
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Re: A Lyrical Lie

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Great dude . but ( Sick of it all ) i think of sum 41 :devious:
It just a sad song
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oh,this is a song about that famous thing - blond hair,blue eyes,I love her - which means love...but song is written pretty good...
This is Mark Allen Hoppus. He likes long walks on the beach. This, this is travis barker. He likes to be read poetry just before sunset. And me, I like to stick small pieces of furniture up my butt.
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I spy on my dad while he is taking a shower just like everyone else
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
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sum54184 wrote:Great dude . but ( Sick of it all ) i think of sum 41 :devious:
and I think of the New York band called Sick Of It All
This is Mark Allen Hoppus. He likes long walks on the beach. This, this is travis barker. He likes to be read poetry just before sunset. And me, I like to stick small pieces of furniture up my butt.
Image
I spy on my dad while he is taking a shower just like everyone else
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
"i think we're gonna be one of those bands thats around forever and even makes records, even if noones buying them and using them for toilet paper...but we'll still make them because we'll be the best fuckin toilet paper anyones ever used...." - Tom Delonge
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Re: A Lyrical Lie

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lol it's something i was going through and i was sick of it lol. k so wat would you guys do if you were falling for one of your good friends? i want to tell her but i don't want it to end up awkward :confusion:
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Re: A Lyrical Lie

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These lyrics are pretty good.. :)
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lol thank you for the feedback guys! appreciate it =)
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