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Which sample do you like better?

Sample 1
3
19%
Sample 2
13
81%
 
Total votes: 16

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Post by sprinks41 »

i'm working on a new song. it's about being a good person, but taking the rebel/asshole within yourself and setting it free for once. which sample do you like better?

Sample 1:
I'm no demon born in heaven
I'm an angel born in hell
Am I evil or am I holy
You'll never be able to tell

Sample 2:
I'm no demon born in heaven
I'm an angel born in hell
I'm as evil as I am holy
I obey as I rebel
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Tough one.. I like sample 2 a little more, though. :D
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sample two is a hella lot better than the first one.
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Sample two definitely!
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sample 2....more mysterious

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lol, i think he's made his decision by now
you have far too much time on your hands

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yea.. i am a bit late...

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