i'm working on a new song. it's about being a good person, but taking the rebel/asshole within yourself and setting it free for once. which sample do you like better?
Sample 1:
I'm no demon born in heaven
I'm an angel born in hell
Am I evil or am I holy
You'll never be able to tell
Sample 2:
I'm no demon born in heaven
I'm an angel born in hell
I'm as evil as I am holy
I obey as I rebel
lyrics help
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Re: lyrics help
sample two is a hella lot better than the first one.
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Re: lyrics help
Sample two definitely!
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Re: lyrics help
sample 2....more mysterious
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Re: lyrics help
lol, i think he's made his decision by now
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Re: lyrics help
yea.. i am a bit late...
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