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Just lookin' to see what you guys think of a song I wrote. http://www.soundcloud.com/truce-delay Start Over, not the other one. Thanks in advance. :)
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I like it!
what are you using to record everything?
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I like the music and the singing too ... :) you did a good job ...
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I used the H2 handy recorder. Small but gets things done. Thanks for the feedbacks guys, any more comments would be appreciated.
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I like it, your voice so okay. I'm sure in time will get better
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