Fall

[ThanksForNothing]

Hey guys,I' fairlynew at this website,adn wanted to post a song, just tell me what you think of it, but go easy its my first song

Fall:

The match has been lit
The fire has started
The flames are on the ground
Pull the trigger
From the gun
For another time around

From a clowns frown
To Satin’s smile
Who will save us
When we fall

Into the ocean
Of disbelief and disregard
To who we are
Now were drowning
Who can save us all
When we fall

Draw your blade
Stab your hate
Taste the blood
From yesterday
Grab the devil by the horns
Wave goodbye
I’m out the door
Watching as you fall

Into the ocean
Of disbelief and disregard
To who we are
Now you drowning
Who will save you now
When you fall

Your pushing away now
Your pushing away
Your pushing away now
You pushing away

Your speeding away now
I’m not far behind
But I can see now
All of the lies
You out me through
And I’ll watch from above
As you fall

Into the ocean
Of disbelief and disregard
To who you are
Now your drowning
Who will save you now
As you fall

Into the ocean
Of disbelief and disregard
To who you are(No one cares)
Now your drowning(And were laughing)
No one will save you now
As you fall

[sumfan4]

God damnit....another sumfan

[Jake-41]

Lulz.

Hi. I wish i could format my thoughts in a song, but i can't.. So i enjoy macaroni art.

[ThanksForNothing]

what do u guys think?

[billyspleen88]

i think its pretty good. i like the sum 41 song references (Grab the devil by the horns, another time around)

[ThanksForNothing]

thanks, when i write songs, i try to hide messages inside of them:P and that was one of them

[UltraKolby]

I like it but the chours was my least favorite part but its only your first song, you'll get better with experience

[patenttiftw]

Charley will kill you for that name.

[Madjid]

Why does everyone write about falling, drowning and dying?! You live in fuckin' Canada! I should be writing about drowning and dying because i'm in Africa, If i get to come to your country, i'd be singing spring songs 24/7.

[Jake-41]

Why does everyone write about falling, drowning and dying?! You live in fuckin' Canada! I should be writing about drowning and dying because i'm in Africa, If i get to come to your country, i'd be singing spring songs 24/7.

Actually, you'd sing about the snow. It's possible to fall, drown, and die in snow.

[ThanksForNothing]

I like it but the chours was my least favorite part but its only your first song, you'll get better with experience

I didn't really like the chorus either, it hard t write chrous's that the hardest part

[patenttiftw]

Why does everyone write about falling, drowning and dying?! You live in fuckin' Canada! I should be writing about drowning and dying because i'm in Africa, If i get to come to your country, i'd be singing spring songs 24/7.

Actually, you'd sing about the snow. It's possible to fall, drown, and die in snow.

BAHAHA!!!

sorry, i just had to do that.

[Shelley41]

Why does everyone write about falling, drowning and dying?! You live in fuckin' Canada! I should be writing about drowning and dying because i'm in Africa, If i get to come to your country, i'd be singing spring songs 24/7.

I guess happy songs are harder to write!

it's good man. like it

[UltraKolby]

I like it but the chours was my least favorite part but its only your first song, you'll get better with experience

I didn't really like the chorus either, it hard t write chrous's that the hardest part

Same here, but sometimes it just comes to me and other times i force write it and it sounds like shit

[FuckT41182]

I like it man ...Grab the devil by the horns :)

[ThanksForNothing]

I like it but the chours was my least favorite part but its only your first song, you'll get better with experience

I didn't really like the chorus either, it hard t write chrous's that the hardest part

Same here, but sometimes it just comes to me and other times i force write it and it sounds like shit

Thats basically what i had to do, i had no idea what to write, but the rest of the song was good, well all im gonna say is expet more, and bette