kind of inspired by Deryck. BTW I got a keyboard for my bday, so I set a drum beat to the song
With a bottle of Jack starring him straight in the face
He sings of a song built on his broken face
On ice his thoughts sit and simmers
Until that one melody just seems to fit
His fingers are blistered from playing the strings
Of an old beat up vintage from '63
He's geared up for touring and playing the shows
He feels more at home when he's on the road
Light up the match let the smoking begin
He's thrown himself into his work again
With his last song still yet to be sung
He looks as me and says live fast and die young
my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
Just.. AMAZING !!!! :)
Liked everything.. but the quality of the recording.
Thumbs up!
one suggestion i'd suggest is that whwn you sing "young" at the last verse, don't stay on the same tone. go down after a few seconds..
Keep up the good work!
Liked everything.. but the quality of the recording.
Thumbs up!
one suggestion i'd suggest is that whwn you sing "young" at the last verse, don't stay on the same tone. go down after a few seconds..
Keep up the good work!
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Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
I saw "Mr.Ro..." and I got all excited thinking it was Mr.Roboto by Styx... *sigh*
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Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
omg! it's really good! i like it!
Some days it just gets so hard
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Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
:) you should send it to Deryck ...as I said before your voice is simply amazing
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Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
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Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
yeahh youre goooodFuckT41182 wrote::) you should send it to Deryck ...as I said before your voice is simply amazing
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Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
did different version, better or worse?
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Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
I like the first one better
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I would also go with the first one :)
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
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Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
I like the first version better, but I really like that melody of the guitar in the second one!
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Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
yeah, I'm leaning that way too after listening to the first again, hate the vocals, but love the guitar like Jer said, guess I'll be making some new lyrics then ;)
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Re: my new song: Mr.RockNRoll
wow, this one is AMAZING! really catchy :)