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have you ever had a problem where you felt like no matter how hard you tried and how much advice/help you sought, it just wouldnt go away or even get easier? i'm going through something like that right now and i wrote this song as kind of an "inspiration" to remind myself not to give up.

Verse 1
This tic devours my mind
It doesn't let me unwind
How much longer til it's gone?
I don't know if I can go on

Chorus
I lost the line between wrong and right
These thoughts keep me up at night (I know you believe me)
I can't wait til this pain subsides (But would you deceive me?)
So I can get back my paradise

Verse 2
I'm reading the signs but can't find where to go
It's times like this I feel so alone
I know it will never just disappear
But I hope someday it all becomes clear

(Chorus)

Bridge
Life may be hard
but I die hard
No more taking the blames
I'm not going down in flames
It may break me down
but I won't back down

(Chorus)
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Mwuahahahahahaha...
Verse 2 and the chorus are so fucking amazing. Got to be aunest sprinks, this is definitely my favorite song of yours!
I love it!
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thanks Jake!!!
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Nice job, man! I liked the second verse alot!
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Hentaiman wrote:Nice job, man! I liked the second verse alot!
thank you Philip! :smile:
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thats really good! Yeah, the second verse is really awsome too!
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Gutter Dreams wrote:thats really good! Yeah, the second verse is really awsome too!
thank you! :smile:
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