Sleeping Beast

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Sleeping Beast

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this is probly the most personal song i've ever posted on here so even if you find it amusing at all please dont make fun.

Verse 1
Living my life stuck to a ball and chain
All of their pleasure causing my pain
Why did I listen to my little voice?
I'm so sick of being pure
Tell me, did I make the right choice?
'Cause I'm not so sure anymore
Well nothing's ever perfect (never perfect!)
So was it even worth it? (worth the time!)

Chorus
If I could do things over they wouldn't come to this
I look back and realize what I led myself to miss
Never should have gone with living behind a shield
Should've had the courage to roam around the field
Some of them wanna be with me
But none of them wanna share with me
It's time to wake the sleeping beast, I can't wait anymore
Looking around I've never felt so left out like this before

Verse 2
Sometimes I feel like I'm stranded in despair
Surrounded by walls of truth that block me from a dare
I know it's not a race but I feel so far behind
All of them have finished and I'm nowhere near the line
It's a fatal disease spreading within me
I'm dying with pride and living with envy
The silence is so weakening (depression!)
The anger is so sickening (aggression!)

(Chorus)

Bridge
No more talking, there is nothing left to say
My wrath is passed the breaking point
I just wanna fuck it away
It's been too long
I want it now
I want it gone
And I don't care how

(Chorus)
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Fucking great. Need I say more?
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turtlehobopirate wrote:Fucking great. Need I say more?
thank you so much! :smile:
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Haha, yea man. That's great. I take that it's supposed to be a more upbeat song, right?
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tomhoppus wrote:Haha, yea man. That's great. I take that it's supposed to be a more upbeat song, right?
thank you :smile: . yea it's an upbeat, kinda fast rock song.
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Very good! I liked it!
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Hentaiman wrote:Very good! I liked it!
thank you!
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:winkwink: awesome song, dude!
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silverdolphin wrote::winkwink: awesome song, dude!
thank you very much! :smile:
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sprinks41 wrote:
silverdolphin wrote::winkwink: awesome song, dude!
thank you very much! :smile:
You're welcome! Keep writing those awesome songs! :winkwink:
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