I'v just made a poem, but i'v change it into a song cz i got some tones. But, i hv no idea wat shld i named it! Help me! Here y'go!
"I know that my life is bleak
Find another life to live
Another conspiracy to breathe
or stay with these apocalyps and crumbled by minutes
I've seen the universe by the dark side of demons eyes
So black and plain
Tasted like night and pain
Chorus:
But, darkness of the night, you're the only hope where i can see stars and moon light
I don't need sun, i don't need heat
I don't need fire, coz im blinded
It's only darkness that I needed
I know my mind is weak
You don't have to tell me coz you're just fake
My failure is my destination
When i'm fail i'v just fell
I've seen this problem by the darkest side of God's fate
You don't have to advice me! What the hell!
*chorus
Hail life! Hail fate! HAil conspiracy! HAil HAIL!
This's so asphyxiating and WHAT THE HELL!
HAil life! Hail fate! HAil conspiracy! Hail HAIL!"
you can add comment too! Or edit some of those words! thx fr help at least read it! -nendhenvious-
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Re: my lastest lyric (No TItle)..tht's wy i'm asking fr ur help!
Does it fit on the music itself?
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certainly sir!
I hvnt rcrdd it yet.
Sounds lil' bit metal, hmmm... maybe hardcr punk, smthng sounds like bad religion married with sex pistols.
The "hail" lines are screamo part.
I hvnt rcrdd it yet.
Sounds lil' bit metal, hmmm... maybe hardcr punk, smthng sounds like bad religion married with sex pistols.
The "hail" lines are screamo part.
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You be doin' them screams?
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yea...my vocalist doin' bad at scream.. so i'm the rythm gtr + screamo vocal... wat? is tht bad?
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I don't think I ever heard a girl scream. At least, not in music.
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@slither. ahahaha! yearh! girls screamo is rare. But more emotional and sharp to the ears. Ahaha! I'v recordd it and it sounds not so bad.
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http://www.myspace.com/rolotomassinendhenvious wrote:@slither. ahahaha! yearh! girls screamo is rare. But more emotional and sharp to the ears. Ahaha! I'v recordd it and it sounds not so bad.
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Re: my lastest lyric (No TItle)..tht's wy i'm asking fr ur help!
title maybe, All That I Needed.
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Jesus Christ, that's horrible. I don't even like male screamo, this is even worse!daredbus wrote:http://www.myspace.com/rolotomassinendhenvious wrote:@slither. ahahaha! yearh! girls screamo is rare. But more emotional and sharp to the ears. Ahaha! I'v recordd it and it sounds not so bad.
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Re: my lastest lyric (No TItle)..tht's wy i'm asking fr ur help!
Haha, if you wanna hear some real girl screaming, try this band, its called M.E.S.S:
www.myspace.com/mrerrorsoundsystem
This band is so fucked up XD
But you gotta hear those screamings, its scary hahaha.
www.myspace.com/mrerrorsoundsystem
This band is so fucked up XD
But you gotta hear those screamings, its scary hahaha.
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Re: my lastest lyric (No TItle)..tht's wy i'm asking fr ur help!
what about "visions" by abnormality. all female vocals, i kid you not.
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I hvnt got any title yet!!!!!
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Pussy ears.Slither wrote:Jesus Christ, that's horrible. I don't even like male screamo, this is even worse!daredbus wrote:http://www.myspace.com/rolotomassinendhenvious wrote:@slither. ahahaha! yearh! girls screamo is rare. But more emotional and sharp to the ears. Ahaha! I'v recordd it and it sounds not so bad.
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Re: my lastest lyric (No TItle)..tht's wy i'm asking fr ur help!
Have a listen to either Arch Enemy or Walls of JericoSlither wrote:I don't think I ever heard a girl scream. At least, not in music.
I suggest Arch Enemy, good band me thinks
Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n9AcG0glVu4
Either enjoy or not
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walls of jericho.. yearr.. "not so bad" band...
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Re: my lastest lyric (No TItle)..tht's wy i'm asking fr ur help!
Name it "The Hailski's"
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Re: my lastest lyric (No TItle)..tht's wy i'm asking fr ur help!
Name it "Typical Angsty Song #6071"
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Re: my lastest lyric (No TItle)..tht's wy i'm asking fr ur help!
Rofl nice.Bass Cone wrote:Name it "Typical Angsty Song #6071"
I was thinking more "Teenage Poetry Made Into a Song"
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