Poem/Song for school

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Poem/Song for school

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Blazing down the interstate
It was 11 o'clock at night
The moon was annoying and cryptic above me
I couldn't stand the light

Turned on the radio
Tried to listen to some music
The songs were emotionless to me
I was ready to lose it

There was no direction
I had no where to go
My mind was a balloon suffocated with air
Ready to blow

I took a look outside my window
at the reflection staring back
In my eyes was an image of a train
Just about to crash

I saw the warning below the scene
About objects in the mirror
It was the first time it made any sense to me
I realized they really are closer than they appear.
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Bass Cone wrote: scene
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not bad :happy:
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*thumbs-up!*
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I loved it, good job, BC!!
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HEY BRITTANY!
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Cool ................. Not bad ..
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sweet. the first thing I thought of for some reason to put this to was Black Sunshine by White Zombie
(music starts at :53)
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