Well it's a practice sig. You have the red, white, and blue going on! It's not bad, but you can't really see the guy's face that well. And some of the colors seem out of place. Wonder what you're real sig will look like.
I like the color combination, and I agree that it's too messy, and the problem is that everything is too merged into eachother. Maybe have something sharper to have a focus?
the colours seem out of place because i just randomly put them there. i used red, white and blue because "The Hand That Feeds" is an anti-political song (to some extent) therefore it would be a fitting pun. you're not really missing anything with the face. plus, by practice sig i just made this to get my creative juice flowing again. i may or may not make this one better. but thanks for the comments
you have far too much time on your hands
"The missing part of me that grows around me like a cage..."