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Confused...

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Confused

I sometimes wish I had a clue,
’Cause now I’m lost and I don’t know what to do.
I wish I'd never told you.
Confused beyond my history,
And now I can’t tell if I’m sad or happy.
Can you tell me?

’Cause when I let it go,
At first it comes as a relief.
But then it all just crashes down,
And more and more I want you there with me.
Need you with me.

Did I ever get over you?
Am I tripping over something that isn’t true?
Do I want it to be true?
I know you’ve gotten over me,
But I just can’t stop thinking that it was meant to be.
You make me believe.
Now I don’t know what to do.
I’m so confused.

Doubtful though I was before,
I saw you, I’m no sceptic anymore
And now it hurts.
I’ve felt it with nobody else,
You know me better than I know myself.
Please help me out.

’Cause when I try to hold on,
I can’t find the space to breathe.
A burden that I just can’t bear,
Suffocating from constant lack of air.
Don’t want you there.

Did I ever get over you?
Am I tripping over something that isn’t true?
Do I want it to be true?
I know you’ve gotten over me,
But I just can’t stop thinking that it was meant to be.
You make me believe.
Now I don’t know what to do.
I’m so confused.

I know I don’t deserve you,
You’re so high above me.
I really must innerve you.
You must be so sick of me.
I’d die for something new.
Go and ask the simple question, “Do you love me?”
Well I don’t know if I don’t or if I do.

Help me out.
If you want the answer, ask yourself.
Help me out.
You know me better than I know myself.

Did I ever get over you?
Am I tripping over something that isn’t true?
Do I want it to be true?
I know you’ve gotten over me,
But I just can’t stop thinking that it was meant to be.
You make me believe.
Now I don’t know what to do.
I can’t stand a single thing about you.
Don’t know what to do.
Yet, it’s hard to live without you.
Don’t know what to do.
I’m so confused.

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That's really good. Enough said.
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that was great. very deep.
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god i loved this song.
i feel a deep connection to it </3
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Re: Confused...

Post by Ericuda »

Wow. I didn't really think it was very good at all. Y'know when you just feel like you have to write about something...this song is one of those ones. Thanks a lot guys!
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Re: Confused...

Post by PunkSteve »

its good that it ends on the title line, & its a well presented song :) i think maybe a change in the line "i'd die for something new" to something a little less... over-used if you know what i mean :)
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