I'll Be Waiting

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I'll Be Waiting

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Just finished this.

Its influenced by the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki.

Sounds a bit like 'Watching You' by Heavens
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Your a million miles away
but we can hear you dying,
screaming for the world that had
had forgotten you
really had to leave
had to leave

Far across the sea your
face stings red with tears of
poison, we're not there to
hold you but,
we would be there if we could
if we could

When the bombs come down
Who will save you
when the lightning strikes
All around you
when the mushroom cloud
suffocates you
when you hit the ground
I'll be waiting

Barely breathing but your
lungs burn to the highest
heavens, holding onto
what was there,
but has been left behind,
been left behind
left behind

When the bombs come down
Who will save you
when the lightning strikes
All around you
when the mushroom cloud
suffocates you
when you hit the ground
I'll be waiting

I'll be waiting
I'll be waiting
I'll be waiting for

When the bombs come down
Who will save you
when the lightning strikes
All around you
when the mushroom cloud
suffocates you
when you hit the ground
I'll be waiting

When the bombs come down
Who will save you
when the lightning strikes
All around you
when the mushroom cloud
suffocates you
when you hit the ground
I'll be waiting
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sounds angry......i like it!
Children of the beast embrace,
To scorn and the human race,
Consume the light that hugs the earth,
And aid the womb in giving birth,
To a group that will appear,
And guide you through this final year,
The dark armies then will come,
When the sum is 41

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upperclasszero wrote:sounds angry......i like it!

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wow it's awesome!
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fucking awesome
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i likee :happy:
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Post by PunkSteve »

its cool... emotional, real... & long!
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