Elly lyrics

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Elly lyrics

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So i actually put some emotion into this (yes, emo).

well cant you see my dreams
they are fallen at your feet
and i am so depressed
with no help from you
what is this i guess
just another excuse
what am i to you?
just a knotch in the bed post

[chorus - instrumenta]

crying in hotel rooms
every tear shed for you
i am so depressed
you are, not who i
thought i knew
sitting in burned out cars
trying to think straight
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line

[chorus - instrumental]

eyes clasped so tight
but i can see what you do
all those little moans
all of your moves

[bridge/variation of chorus]

tasting the flesh on your bones
leaves me with something less than myself

take me down x 3
take me down elly x 5

Its the first song (other than Why Are You So Emo?) that i put completely together, tune and all. The lyrics have significant meaning to me, especially "take me down Elly".
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sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??

i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line

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Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??

i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
yea its kinda abstract.

It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
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Chum 41 wrote:
Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??

i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
yea its kinda abstract.

It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
dont make no sense............ :suicide:

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Shiv wrote:
Chum 41 wrote:
Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??

i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
yea its kinda abstract.

It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
dont make no sense............ :suicide:
Thats because you have intention span of a marble. :devious:
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Shiv wrote:
Chum 41 wrote:
Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??

i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
yea its kinda abstract.

It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
dont make no sense............ :suicide:
it makes sense, you dolt.
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Chum 41 wrote:
Shiv wrote:
Chum 41 wrote:
Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??

i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
yea its kinda abstract.

It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
dont make no sense............ :suicide:
Thats because you have intention span of a marble. :devious:
Good point LOL

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That's pretty good. Nice
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turtlehobopirate wrote:That's pretty good. Nice
thank you sir.
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Chum 41 wrote:
turtlehobopirate wrote:That's pretty good. Nice
thank you sir.
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turtlehobopirate wrote:
Chum 41 wrote:
turtlehobopirate wrote:That's pretty good. Nice
thank you sir.
I'm a girl...
and a beautiful one at that.
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^ :lol!: ^

nice song.
you have far too much time on your hands

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Chum 41 wrote:
turtlehobopirate wrote:
Chum 41 wrote:
turtlehobopirate wrote:That's pretty good. Nice
thank you sir.
I'm a girl...
and a beautiful one at that.
rofl nice save :hehe:

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oooh love song. i like the lyrics! can you sing? :D
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iemnaiz wrote:oooh love song. i like the lyrics! can you sing? :D
Not really haha. go check the musician sec for the demo thanks btw.
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