So i actually put some emotion into this (yes, emo).
well cant you see my dreams
they are fallen at your feet
and i am so depressed
with no help from you
what is this i guess
just another excuse
what am i to you?
just a knotch in the bed post
[chorus - instrumenta]
crying in hotel rooms
every tear shed for you
i am so depressed
you are, not who i
thought i knew
sitting in burned out cars
trying to think straight
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
[chorus - instrumental]
eyes clasped so tight
but i can see what you do
all those little moans
all of your moves
[bridge/variation of chorus]
tasting the flesh on your bones
leaves me with something less than myself
take me down x 3
take me down elly x 5
Its the first song (other than Why Are You So Emo?) that i put completely together, tune and all. The lyrics have significant meaning to me, especially "take me down Elly".
Elly lyrics
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Re: Elly lyrics
sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??
i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
makes no sense??
i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
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Re: Elly lyrics
yea its kinda abstract.Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??
i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
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Re: Elly lyrics
dont make no sense............Chum 41 wrote:yea its kinda abstract.Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??
i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
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Re: Elly lyrics
Thats because you have intention span of a marble.Shiv wrote:dont make no sense............Chum 41 wrote:yea its kinda abstract.Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??
i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
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Re: Elly lyrics
it makes sense, you dolt.Shiv wrote:dont make no sense............Chum 41 wrote:yea its kinda abstract.Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??
i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
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Good point LOLChum 41 wrote:Thats because you have intention span of a marble.Shiv wrote:dont make no sense............Chum 41 wrote:yea its kinda abstract.Shiv wrote:sitting in burned out cars?
makes no sense??
i liked this part:
you wanna break my heart?
take a number and get in line
It means a few things basically to put it: the relationship is burned out so is the care that times were had in.
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Re: Elly lyrics
That's pretty good. Nice
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Re: Elly lyrics
thank you sir.turtlehobopirate wrote:That's pretty good. Nice
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I'm a girl...Chum 41 wrote:thank you sir.turtlehobopirate wrote:That's pretty good. Nice
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Re: Elly lyrics
and a beautiful one at that.turtlehobopirate wrote:I'm a girl...Chum 41 wrote:thank you sir.turtlehobopirate wrote:That's pretty good. Nice
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Re: Elly lyrics
^ ^
nice song.
nice song.
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rofl nice saveChum 41 wrote:and a beautiful one at that.turtlehobopirate wrote:I'm a girl...Chum 41 wrote:thank you sir.turtlehobopirate wrote:That's pretty good. Nice
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Re: Elly lyrics
Not really haha. go check the musician sec for the demo thanks btw.iemnaiz wrote:oooh love song. i like the lyrics! can you sing? :D