What A Fine Day

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What A Fine Day

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Phew... It seems like its been aaages since I wrote a song (my last one being Fools Poem). Here is 'What A Fine Day'

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What a fine day to wake up
What a fine day to wake up and see it all
Seems that we'll never make up
But I wouldn’t change it
Not for the earth

What a fine day to be happy
What a fine day to sing a true love song
And on the outside I'm angry
But it’s something I do
To make you feel wrong

So here's one for the memories
And here's one for the stars
If it looks like we're trying to hard
It’s because baby, we are
And this one's about what we never did
And this ones just for you
My heart is not in the right place
But it’s the right place for you.

What a fine day to have power
What a fine day to be ruler of the world
And even now it’s not over
My world is changing
Haven’t you heard?

What a fine day to go see you
What a fine day to go see you take it all
But what the hell can I do
Because you were stronger
You took the fall

So here's one for the memories
And here's one for the stars
If it looks like we're trying to hard
It’s because baby, we are
And this one's about what we never did
And this ones just for you
My heart is not in the right place
But it’s the right place for you.

And I don’t want to wake up at morning no
I don’t want to wake up at all
And I know you'd be trying to catch me
But baby, I'd never fall
And I never thought it would be this way,
No I can't keep my feelings from you
And although I'm trying my hardest,
You know I’m telling the truth

What a fine day to see through you
What a fine day to see through your little plan
Looking back it was easy
But looking forward
Was how it began

What a fine day to go home now
What a fine day to go home and start again
Lying in bed but forever
Scheming and planning
And laughing in pain

So here's one for the memories
And here's one for the stars
If it looks like we're trying to hard
It’s because baby, we are
And this one’s about what we never did
And this ones just for you
My heart is not in the right place
But it’s the right place for you.
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nice lyrics, btw i got a fine day :P
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I like it :D I also like the way it's in chronological order
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