thought i'd see how you guys like it. (i hope this is the right place to post this) lmk
thanks!! -heather
its no perfect but i think i did pretty well
simple chords, only two, but its more about the lyrics
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8Li-bZw3_k
its such a loss
to a never ending cause
what now is gone
was never there all along
theres no point in crossing the line
with no consequence in mind
traded in reality
for the actuality
clinging to your past
with nothing left to grasp
your going to go down
if your running on falling ground
sheltered by the lies
that left your conscious blind
on your knees pleading
for what your not needing
when facing your fears
not all things are clear
if given a choice
would you choose your own voice
song i wrote
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Re: song i wrote
It's pretty good. and it rhymes! BONUS POINTS! 
Re: song i wrote
Hmmm... it's a pretty good song, but you may want to revise your grammar.
