Six Feet Under

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Six Feet Under

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Verse 1
Introducing, the intruding, nightmares of my dreams
Help me Jesus, these diseases, ripping all my seams
I try to find a way before the answers fade
Take hold and pray as my life goes down
Everything is lost in the midst of a demon parade
I cry for help but no one hears a sound

Chorus
Six feet under. Just bury me deep
Way down under. It's where I'd rather be
All I wonder. Could I have been saved?
Six feet under. Alive in the grave

Verse 2
Paranoia, insomnia, the masters of my doom
Possessing me, depressing me, since I was in the womb
Nowhere near can I find what I need
Always the way that the story goes
Smoke blurrs my view like a frantic stampede
I'm laid to rest as my brain explodes

(Chorus)

Bridge
I go through each day, thinking nothing's OK
I can't sleep at night, 'til it's alright
I need to realize, my dreams are lies
They shelter the truth, and watch me go through
The frantic misery, with no one to save me
No answers can be found, six feet dead underground

(Chorus)

Outro
Hear the cries in my head as they scare me to death
Grip the cross, sign of the cross, as I prepare for what comes next
The end is near, I fear the fear that is now my thoughts
Drop to my knees and surrender, all hope is lost
Why do I think too much?
I shouldn't need a crutch
Paranoia's all I know
I feel no more pain, 'cause I'm way beyond insane
Hate to say it but I told you so
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thats awesome!
good job
All that I need is time for me to breathe. Dream little dreams that only I believe. Now that I see beyond the light, I'm gonna be, I'll be alright.
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thank you! :grin:
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Pretty good.
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looks cool, especially the chorus.
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great! lyrics are sort of the same as Speak of The Devil.. or was it The Jester? can't remember bahah. great song :)
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thank you :smile:
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:agreed:
great, awesum
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dirk wrote::agreed:
great, awesum
thanks man :smile:
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