still haven't gotten word about the contest, but I thought I'd share
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a4Mg_JqfWWE
song i wrote for a contest
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
really good
i liked the chorus
i liked the chorus
- the perfect li e
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
Yeah you can't really hear the singing too much but otherwise awsome!
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
here are the lyrics, I need something better than a digital camera to record with
I watched the static on the tv all day
theres nothing better on to watch anyway
no need to pick up the telephone
theres nothing to hear but the sound of a dial tone
I tried to fit in, but I could not begin
there was a waiting list to hang with the cool kids
and I've tried so hard to gossip all my life
but I soon found out its really not that right
theres nothing in the fridge to eat
can't think of anything to do but sleep
wrinkled up paper laying on the floor
from trying to write this song the night before
I tried to fit in, but I could not begin
there was a waiting list
to make the most of it
I've tried all my life to be dignified
but i found out to late its all just so fake
I don't wanna be part of this conformity
I don't wanna be part of the majority
I don't wanna be part of this reality
I don't wanna be anything, anything but me
I watched the static on the tv all day
theres nothing better on to watch anyway
no need to pick up the telephone
theres nothing to hear but the sound of a dial tone
I tried to fit in, but I could not begin
there was a waiting list to hang with the cool kids
and I've tried so hard to gossip all my life
but I soon found out its really not that right
theres nothing in the fridge to eat
can't think of anything to do but sleep
wrinkled up paper laying on the floor
from trying to write this song the night before
I tried to fit in, but I could not begin
there was a waiting list
to make the most of it
I've tried all my life to be dignified
but i found out to late its all just so fake
I don't wanna be part of this conformity
I don't wanna be part of the majority
I don't wanna be part of this reality
I don't wanna be anything, anything but me
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
I love your melodies
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
It sounds awesome, youre a good guitarplayer and singer! Keep it up
Dunno if im late (guess so) but your new sig looks sweetie
Dunno if im late (guess so) but your new sig looks sweetie
All creds for the Still Waiting sig are for Jeremy!
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
thanks everyone! appreciate it
billy, not to late, just made it a few days ago, thanks a bunch!
billy, not to late, just made it a few days ago, thanks a bunch!
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
ya gr8 song and sig
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
wow you've got amazing talent! i loved the chorus and guitar solo thingy
great keep it up ^^
lol yea and awesome sig xD
great keep it up ^^
lol yea and awesome sig xD
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
thanks!! glad you guys dig it..I'm working on a cover of "count your last blessings" so i'll post that soon. I just uploaded this, just messin around
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cvli9NbOBA
and another song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8Li-bZw3_k
oh also thanks for the comments on my sig!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cvli9NbOBA
and another song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8Li-bZw3_k
oh also thanks for the comments on my sig!!
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
Super gay.
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
wow dont be a bitch....noobt-j wrote:Super gay.
criticize it with constructive comments or say its good
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hardcoresum41fan wrote:wow dont be a bitch....noobt-j wrote:Super gay.
criticize it with constructive comments or say its good
Make it less gay.
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thanks for having my back, seems like hes gone in a week so i'll just deal with it.hardcoresum41fan wrote:wow dont be a bitch....noobt-j wrote:Super gay.
criticize it with constructive comments or say its good
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yea i doubt that. he seems to be good friends with nic....fenderrocks wrote:thanks for having my back, seems like hes gone in a week so i'll just deal with it.hardcoresum41fan wrote:wow dont be a bitch....noobt-j wrote:Super gay.
criticize it with constructive comments or say its good
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
Another asshole with a PD mentality, this is exactly what TNS needs now.t-j wrote:Super gay.
You're not funny, you're just making yourself less liked.
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
Man, wtf?t-j wrote:Super gay.
I'm not surprised you got banned from PD.
don't go around criticizing people when you can't do or work as hard as them.
AND you just came here! you don't even KNOW the people, yet you insult them. :/
jeez.
anyway Heather, you're a really talented and awesome guitar player and songwriter!!
you're pretty good at singing too =P your songs are really catchy =P
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^^ thanks Reem I really appreciate it!
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Re: song i wrote for a contest
You forgot to add: AND NEWBIE'S N00B ZOMG !!!!!GreenReem41 wrote:Man, wtf?t-j wrote:Super gay.
I'm not surprised you got banned from PD.
don't go around criticizing people when you can't do or work as hard as them.
AND you just came here! you don't even KNOW the people, yet you insult them. :/
jeez.
anyway Heather, you're a really talented and awesome guitar player and songwriter!!
you're pretty good at singing too =P your songs are really catchy =P
I pwn all of you by chosing the best member evah as a n00b.
PS: t-j is banned for this board, noone will miss him, so just try not to mention his name again, so that he'll just die scared and alone.
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