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WillySpleen
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My new jam

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itttttss :wordyo:

...this one is for u jonothon....

JB
cant u see
tht u the one for me
maybe
someday ull b wit me
but ino
tht we can never b
cuz baby
u know
i cant pay ur fee

[Chorus]
todaaaaaaaaaaaaay
ino u so close but u feel so far awaaaaaay haaaaaay
i get turned on [or r ] (as a background vocal) by everything u say hay(credited to upperclasszero)
bc baby u kno every kiss begins with kaaaay hay

Why u gotta make me go thru all this
all these punk-ass motha fuking lyrics i spit
fuk this, u kno i cant wait forever
baby u kno tht thers only one real answer
ITS U AND ME, BITCH, NOW OR NEVER

(guitar solo)

[Chorus]

You make me wanna beat ur sorry ass up and down the street
im gunna keep goin till i stop ur fukin heartbeat
ull think im a motha fukin i
when i show u absolutely no fukin mercy

[Chorus]

now ur gone, y didnt u jus give in
it seems now they gotta alert all family, friends and kin
ill jus get another glass of tonic water and gin
forget it all, start over, and chalk up another win
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Re: My new jam

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whats this?
you're like my own personal brand of heroin
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Re: My new jam

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kevmaster wrote:whats this?
a love song
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it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!
Jan 22, 2009

cone u r so fucking kool stevo u r fucking bizzyd u r cool too whats your new album called
asked by cone1212 on Jan 21, 2009 5:03pm

Contrary to what you just wrote, I'm not fucking bizzy d. We're just friends. Let's not go and make Cone jealous now...
answered by Stevo on Jan 22, 2009 2:18pm
if you like this Q&A, then you should read my story:
http://theresnosolution.com/forum/viewt ... =25&t=5382

UPDATED!

Still Waiting is my amazing master

GreenReem41 and Sara41 are my awsome noobs
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xmarryxx wrote:it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!
thank you
ya its a rapcore song, and i havnt rele written any music for it yet but when i do the guitar solo will b a lil later :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro:
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WillySpleen wrote:
xmarryxx wrote:it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!
thank you
ya its a rapcore song, and i havnt rele written any music for it yet but when i do the guitar solo will b a lil later :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro:
what do you mean you are writing the music, im the one who is writing the music
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To scorn and the human race,
Consume the light that hugs the earth,
And aid the womb in giving birth,
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And guide you through this final year,
The dark armies then will come,
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upperclasszero wrote:
WillySpleen wrote:
xmarryxx wrote:it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!
thank you
ya its a rapcore song, and i havnt rele written any music for it yet but when i do the guitar solo will b a lil later :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro:
what do you mean you are writing the music, im the one who is writing the music
no...u r makin it, im gunna write it down :devious:
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WillySpleen wrote:
upperclasszero wrote:
WillySpleen wrote:
xmarryxx wrote:it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!
thank you
ya its a rapcore song, and i havnt rele written any music for it yet but when i do the guitar solo will b a lil later :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro:
what do you mean you are writing the music, im the one who is writing the music
no...u r makin it, im gunna write it down :devious:
shut up
Children of the beast embrace,
To scorn and the human race,
Consume the light that hugs the earth,
And aid the womb in giving birth,
To a group that will appear,
And guide you through this final year,
The dark armies then will come,
When the sum is 41
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Re: My new jam

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i jus mite
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Re: My new jam

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haha interesting lyrics, you and me Bitch! lol

i like it :)
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