Yes, I nicked the title from the other song on this page, but I thought It was a decent title.
Also, I recycled a chorus from a previous song.
I want to take this opportunity to annouce my new acoustic project, called 'Church & Destroy'. www.myspace.com/churchdestroymusic
constructive criticism please!
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She looks like she's cold and she's tired
She looks like an angel to me
I hated to say, it sounded cliche
but she means the world to me
She's been through alot, well we all have
If she would just call Id be there
Before I would go, I'd let her know
She doesnt see how much I care
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete
She tells me about all her feelings
But not of her feelings for me
If she would just say, I want you today
It would make it perfect for me
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete
Shes out of my leage says my body
My heart says shes already yours
I wrote her this song, to move us along
Some day I will be all hers
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete
Yes,
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete
For The Girl I'll Never Get
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Re: For The Girl I'll Never Get
shes on in a million which makes my chances like a million to one.
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Re: For The Girl I'll Never Get
WillySpleen is my n00b
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Great chorus.
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Re: For The Girl I'll Never Get
Nice song. the chorus is really great yeah. Although this subject is so overddone in my opinion, haha, but hey, even I have like a song or two about a girl i'll never get, I think we all do haha.
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lol thats a four year strong lyrics good lyricCIRCUITzach wrote:shes on in a million which makes my chances like a million to one.
anyway
i realy like it dude thats good as nice job
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Re: For The Girl I'll Never Get
I don't have songs about girl that i'll never get, cause i've noticed that i can get every girl i want ;|Hentaiman wrote:Nice song. the chorus is really great yeah. Although this subject is so overddone in my opinion, haha, but hey, even I have like a song or two about a girl i'll never get, I think we all do haha.
sad, isn't it? :(
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Re: For The Girl I'll Never Get
Just like to say, Church & Destroy demoed this today, and it sounds brilliant.
www.myspace.com/churchdestroymusic - add us, if you havent already.
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