Falling Apart

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Falling Apart

Post by withchappedlips »

This is a terrible song, and I'm only posting it so Chris can see I put "I'm falling apart here" in to another song. Anyways, here's the lyrics.



I'm so freaking sick
Of everyone in the whole state of Michigan.
We're not alright
We're not OK
Don't you ever think about it. Don't you ever.

I'm falling apart here
I'm falling apart here
I'm falling apart here
I'm falling apart here

She'll be fine if you just leave her alone
I don't think she has a problem anymore with you
Just get in line, don't ever upset yourself
She'll be yours if you just wait for a minute

I tell myself all these things
that I don't really care about
I'm so honest with myself
Why do we care? Why do we worry?
We could be somebody else

We're not alright
We're not OK
Don't you ever think about it. Don't you ever.

I'm falling apart here
I'm falling apart here
I'm falling apart here
I'm falling apart here


She'll be fine if you just leave her alone
I don't think she has a problem anymore with you
Just get in line, don't ever upset yourself
She'll be yours if you just wait for a minute

I'm dead
I'm dead
You don't care
She won't care
I'm dead
I'm dead
You don't care
She won't care

I'm falling apart here
I'm falling apart here
I'm falling apart here
I'm falling apart here

She'll be fine if you just leave her alone
I don't think she has a problem anymore with you
Just get in line, don't ever upset yourself
She'll be yours if you just wait for a minute

I'm dead
I'm dead
I'm dead
I'm dead
I'm dead
And I know I said I needed space,

but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.

So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,

I'm just not ready to leave my room.

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I think that this is good as a poem, it has some deep meaning in it if you know what i mean, but as a song....not really.

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it would be a good song if you turned like the im dead thing into something else
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I think I make it fit well. I wish I could record it but chris has all of the sudden decide to quit my band again. I think if I were to record it for you guys, you'd understand how it's supposed to work. I'm dead fits quite well.
And I know I said I needed space,

but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.

So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,

I'm just not ready to leave my room.

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