Fire Works

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Fire Works

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What is this
Is it true
What is happening to you
I know, I feel it also
Do you laugh
At the crime?
Do you sing it line by line
Can you tell me once if it is true

Don't you want to go to the
Fire works down below
Its warming in my throat
It burns for you
Empty shell of a man
trying whatever he can
Sinning just for you
You told him to

Keep you head
Held up high
I dont want to see you cry
It gets me too emotional
Can you see
on tv?
Not what it is meant to be
The crime of an adultery

Don't you want to go to the
Fire works down below
Its warming in my throat
It burns for you
Empty shell of a man
trying whatever he can
Sinning just for you
You told him to

Are you mine
I cant see
knowing now who you will be
I wanted what was best for you
Better now
Find me there
Wash away all my dispair
Come find me when you are ready

Don't you want to go to the
Fire works down below
Its warming in my throat
It burns for you
Empty shell of a man
trying whatever he can
Sinning just for you
You told him to

Every time
It grows with time
Hours spent
finding you
running fast
but coming last
what am i to do?

Don't you want to go to the
Fire works down below
Its warming in my throat
It burns for you
Empty shell of a man
trying whatever he can
Sinning just for you
You told him to (him to)
you told him to (him to)
You told him to, you lied
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Post by Gibsum 41 »

seems pretty good

just to make sure, in your song fire works= hell, right?
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Gibsum 41 wrote:fire works= hell, right?
Yes.

Also, I intended it to be two separate words.
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oh, well nice reference :wink:
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Pretty good
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Post by wiggs1441 »

yesh
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NoReason27 is my Grand-master!
BrandonCorey is my N00B!
Sum-42 is my Grand N00B!

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i like nice job man
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Post by Mr. Maker »

nice, its kinda long but i dont know the music so its prolly super short
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Post by Hentaiman »

Yeah, its nice, although like that it seems kinda long, i dunno.
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really nice!
Curious fact: I wrote a song called fire works too,but that's completely different ;-)
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